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2/15/2009 c4 5Teraunce
I hope you finish this someday. so, Ash's element is that of Light...interesting... 15/10.
9/13/2004 c1 Smaitlin
Now, the author of this... I know for a fact, is very HOT. Well, the story, it is no where near as hot as tha author
12/12/2003 c4 Kit Kat
gr *growls* That darned Laytoa. I'm liking her less and less after each...uh... word. I just want to give her a piece of my mind. Acting like she is the best at everything. I hate girls like that. Why did she use Ash's Charizard? Did he give it to her? I forgot...
*sweatdrops* Sorry. We all have our blonde moments at times, and I guess my time was then. All this worrying about exams is going to my head...
Sparky is such a funny fellow. ^-^ " “I believe this is yours,” he lifted the blue cloth that was hanging on the wall “and you got the beautiful Misty to deliver it.”" I think that is so cute! Even though I am a full out AAML believer (Misty will come back! The stars tell me so! uh...*sweatdrops*), a little more of Sparky crushing on Misty could never hurt, and if Misty just ignores him and he keeps on going... well that will just be hilarious!
NO! Laytoa leave Ash alone! *mutters* ...stupid girl... doesn't know her place...
When Misty said that the cut on her leg was nothing compared to her stomach, well, was she talking about the kick that she got from Laytoa *glares* or a weird pain that she got when Laytoa said that Ash was hers?
Ah! *gasps* Too many doors! *faints* Do you have any idea what in the world they are there for? *sweatdrops*
Yay! Togepi came back! That reminds me... I havn't played my game in months!
Koga is really oblivious to everything isn't he? lol
Why is Misty so mean? If you already answered this question before, I'm sorry! *takes out white flag* Remember what I said up there about my blonde moments?
Please don't stop this story. Please! *gets puppy-dog eyes* It is too good. You only need to try and update faster. Mabye over the Winter break you can do something. Try to update soon, write longer chapters, and add more AAML.
AAML 4ever ^-^
8/9/2003 c3 Kit Kat
It makes me feel all warm inside that you appreciate my reviews. I feel special!

Don't you dare think your story is bad! *gets Tony the Tiger expression* It's GREAT!...uh sorry about that...heh heh

Thank you soo much for answering my questions! Most authors don't answer them or they say 'i will answer them during the story' or something like that. It just gets on my nerves! And the answers to the questions were simple, and yet they fit the story perfectly.

Anyway, the beggining of this chapter was a little confusing but it cleared out by the end of the chapter, so don't worry.

AAML is the best way to go, but I sense that Misty isn't really happy about being with Ash. Why is that? Did anything happen in the past, like an argument (which always happens)? And speaking of the past, How did Ash, Misty, and Brock seperate? You probably already mentioned the reasons, but I missed it (which happens alot).

HAHAHA! Too true about Team Rocket!

What is Misty without Togepi (and please make it so that it evolved, it makes it so much more easier). It might be anoying, but hey, it needs to be there even for a little while. (Mine evolved! Heh Heh! You gotta show it lots of love. Give it things like proteins, carbons, etc.)

I love it that your making the chapters longer! All you need to do now is speed up your updating.

Hopefully in the next chapter there would be more AAML and explain why Misty has some sort of grudge on Ash.

(I hope this is long enough for ya ;p)

AAML 4ever ^-^
6/24/2003 c2 3Mysteris
So far so good. I like the dark future take on Pokemon and the strain between Ash and Misty. One question: how did Suicine know about Misty?
6/23/2003 c2 Kit Kat
Yay! You updated, and it's an AAML! *smiles*

So the gym leaders and others are making some sort of army against Giovanni? Cool!

Is Silver Wing some sort of mutation like the Shadows? Or, is he just blue because of some other reason?

What does Team Rocket want with Daisy? Do they want her pokemon? Do they want her to fight for them? Or is it something else? *laughs evilly*

You are giving the impression that Erica might like Ash. I don't like that. But since this is a AAML, I bear with it for a while.

What causes the transformation of a regular pokemon into a Shadow? Is it their emotion at the time? Or does their trainer have to do with it?

Why is Suicune there for? Is he to guide Misty or something?

And most importantly, Where is Togepi! Or is it a Togetic now? Can you try to bring her/him back into the story. Like Erika was taking care of her/him for Misty or something.

Don't get discouraged by my questions. I love you story. It has a very unique plot, and I hope you will update soon. Great job so far!

AAML 4ever ^-^
5/29/2003 c1 2Shadow Fox 05
nice work keep it going
5/29/2003 c1 Kit Kat
Great story! I love the plot. Really original. Adding, in the end, the attacks that were used, the pokemon that uses it, and the discription of the attack is a good touch. I'm waiting for a update real soon because I love your story so much. I am a fan of AAMLs, so could you make this fic one (You probably already thought of that). The story is great and update real soon.

AAML 4ever ^-^
5/29/2003 c1 Aletheios
Interesting... Are they Pokemon from another world?

What triggers such a change? A highly infectious genetic-implantation virus?

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