for The Laughing Lion11/30/2023 c1 teufelchen
Schade das Cersei die Beziehung der Brüder zerstört das Myrcella&Tommen nicht von Jason und einer anständigen Frau ist.
Schade das Cersei die Beziehung der Brüder zerstört das Myrcella&Tommen nicht von Jason und einer anständigen Frau ist.
2/22/2023 c6 King Mern
Great that Stannis dies and Jason agrees peace with Jon and that Jon marries Myrcella.
Great that Stannis dies and Jason agrees peace with Jon and that Jon marries Myrcella.
2/22/2023 c6 DarkJon
Ich hoffe das Stannis verliert und Jon und Jason Frieden schließen.
Ich hoffe das Stannis verliert und Jon und Jason Frieden schließen.
18/29/2020 c6 connorjholden
I really enjoyed reading this story. I’m very interested to see what else you have. This is a well thought out OC and I hope you update soon. It keeps me thinking on what is to happen next and it also is enjoyable to see characters that seemingly got away with everything get put in their place by their own blood.
I really enjoyed reading this story. I’m very interested to see what else you have. This is a well thought out OC and I hope you update soon. It keeps me thinking on what is to happen next and it also is enjoyable to see characters that seemingly got away with everything get put in their place by their own blood.
7/16/2020 c6 Bella-swan11
Jason you know that there are rumors about the dragons of Daenerys, if they are true the whole game of thrones changes because she will come to Westeros to recover the kingdoms; but if you anticipate and prepare Jon to ascend to the throne exposing his true origin then you stop Daenerys. To ensure your family you can negotiate that Jon marry your daughter Joanna or Myrcella, that is something you should think about in detail; you will not let the mistakes of your father and brothers destroy the Lannister family. The nobles always prefer a male heir so the option will be Jon, you need to eliminate Stannis you must be the one who trusts Jon you can deliver the Freys who murdered his brother and all his men; Jason, when you find out that Shae betrayed Tyrion with your father, you will have no mercy on the bitch.
Jason you know that there are rumors about the dragons of Daenerys, if they are true the whole game of thrones changes because she will come to Westeros to recover the kingdoms; but if you anticipate and prepare Jon to ascend to the throne exposing his true origin then you stop Daenerys. To ensure your family you can negotiate that Jon marry your daughter Joanna or Myrcella, that is something you should think about in detail; you will not let the mistakes of your father and brothers destroy the Lannister family. The nobles always prefer a male heir so the option will be Jon, you need to eliminate Stannis you must be the one who trusts Jon you can deliver the Freys who murdered his brother and all his men; Jason, when you find out that Shae betrayed Tyrion with your father, you will have no mercy on the bitch.
7/13/2020 c4 Bella-swan11
Jason, with your intelligence, you will discover that Jon is actually the son of Prince Rhaegar; This information is important so as not to lose the throne. You are going to have Tommen sign a decree releasing Jon from the night's watch, making him become the new guardian of the North and marrying him to your daughter; what better prize for Joanna to be the future queen of the 7 kingdoms. So you also punish Sansa for betraying her father and trying to run away from you, when she is your wife is a good lesson; how do you know that the Tyrells helped kill Joffrey in order to gain power. You are going to punish them because their fault almost killed your beloved brother Tyrion, you will not let Margaery reign if she wants to marry it will be with Jaime; If Olenna refuses, you will make her entire family exterminated for her crimes. Also that you want your brothers to suffer it is time to separate them definitively, what better way to make Jaime and Margaery marry after all it is time for Jaime to have legitimate children; Of course Jaime can oppose but you can threaten him that you will tell Tommen the truth about all his sins and Cersei's. Knowing that Tommen would not forgive them and that their lives could be in danger, but he married Margaery and began to have children; In this way Tywin would be at peace when seeing Jaime married and Cersei would suffer. It is also time to eliminate Shae a whore, she is not a good woman for Tyrion except one who sleeps with your father.
Jason, with your intelligence, you will discover that Jon is actually the son of Prince Rhaegar; This information is important so as not to lose the throne. You are going to have Tommen sign a decree releasing Jon from the night's watch, making him become the new guardian of the North and marrying him to your daughter; what better prize for Joanna to be the future queen of the 7 kingdoms. So you also punish Sansa for betraying her father and trying to run away from you, when she is your wife is a good lesson; how do you know that the Tyrells helped kill Joffrey in order to gain power. You are going to punish them because their fault almost killed your beloved brother Tyrion, you will not let Margaery reign if she wants to marry it will be with Jaime; If Olenna refuses, you will make her entire family exterminated for her crimes. Also that you want your brothers to suffer it is time to separate them definitively, what better way to make Jaime and Margaery marry after all it is time for Jaime to have legitimate children; Of course Jaime can oppose but you can threaten him that you will tell Tommen the truth about all his sins and Cersei's. Knowing that Tommen would not forgive them and that their lives could be in danger, but he married Margaery and began to have children; In this way Tywin would be at peace when seeing Jaime married and Cersei would suffer. It is also time to eliminate Shae a whore, she is not a good woman for Tyrion except one who sleeps with your father.
7/12/2020 c4 Moshi
And Arya’s naivety got Mycah and Lady killed. Arya only disliked the Lannisters after the Trident. Sansa was betrothed to Joffrey and wanted to say goodbye or at least get Cersei to change her father’s mind, Eddard forgot to bother in warning the daughter he deliberately put in the most danger, what the court was truly like. Eddard’s death is on Joffrey, Cersei, Littlefinger and Eddard’s hands. Eddard gave the fucking game away, himself. Sansa may have played a small part, but fucking hell, it wasn’t selling them out. You think that Cersei didn’t know? Also, Jason has a lot of fucking nerve, he knows that his nephews should never have had any power, so how fucking dare he condemn a 11-12 sheltered, naive, and neglected little girl who didn’t understand while he is continuing the lie that Cersei’s bastards are Baratheons. He’s done more than Sansa ever could. So fuck that. Also, does it not occur to this stable genius that he is a fucking Lannister! He aided his family in killing her’s. Sansa wants to leave (she is also Littlefinger’s downfall, she also learns from him, so you are taking her arc from her). Arya didn’t really see through it, she didn’t care for the role she was born into, she fucked off about the rules, Ned warned only her and she only escaped because of her getting to be out of the Tower for a lesson while Sansa was forbidden with no explanation. Sansa’s actions were out of jealousy towards a younger sibling getting treated differentially. Arya was just as sheltered and naive as Sansa.
And Arya’s naivety got Mycah and Lady killed. Arya only disliked the Lannisters after the Trident. Sansa was betrothed to Joffrey and wanted to say goodbye or at least get Cersei to change her father’s mind, Eddard forgot to bother in warning the daughter he deliberately put in the most danger, what the court was truly like. Eddard’s death is on Joffrey, Cersei, Littlefinger and Eddard’s hands. Eddard gave the fucking game away, himself. Sansa may have played a small part, but fucking hell, it wasn’t selling them out. You think that Cersei didn’t know? Also, Jason has a lot of fucking nerve, he knows that his nephews should never have had any power, so how fucking dare he condemn a 11-12 sheltered, naive, and neglected little girl who didn’t understand while he is continuing the lie that Cersei’s bastards are Baratheons. He’s done more than Sansa ever could. So fuck that. Also, does it not occur to this stable genius that he is a fucking Lannister! He aided his family in killing her’s. Sansa wants to leave (she is also Littlefinger’s downfall, she also learns from him, so you are taking her arc from her). Arya didn’t really see through it, she didn’t care for the role she was born into, she fucked off about the rules, Ned warned only her and she only escaped because of her getting to be out of the Tower for a lesson while Sansa was forbidden with no explanation. Sansa’s actions were out of jealousy towards a younger sibling getting treated differentially. Arya was just as sheltered and naive as Sansa.
7/12/2020 c4 Mister LaGuardia
I'm wondering if Jason destroyed the Iron Islands how Red Wedding happened; after all, the betrayal was only possible because the Iron Born attacked the North. Without it the ambush would have been more complex since Bran or Rickon would just take on his title and the Norths strength would remain. I'm also curious what Jason did when Tyrion was capt by Catelyn. I doubt he reacted like Jaime, but as defensive as he is of Tyrion I'm assuming he did somethingI'm curious what.
I'm wondering if Jason destroyed the Iron Islands how Red Wedding happened; after all, the betrayal was only possible because the Iron Born attacked the North. Without it the ambush would have been more complex since Bran or Rickon would just take on his title and the Norths strength would remain. I'm also curious what Jason did when Tyrion was capt by Catelyn. I doubt he reacted like Jaime, but as defensive as he is of Tyrion I'm assuming he did somethingI'm curious what.
7/12/2020 c2 XenoLucifer
Too much cursing really, it takes away a lot of impact from the story. Cursing overall is fine, but it's usually used few and far between to show frustration. Listen closely, what's scarier/more impactful? someone that rarely curses and acts nice to most starts cursing or something that curses all the time curses again? the obvious answer is the guy that rarely curses.
It's like when the quiet guy that gets bullied and usually takes it suddenly explodes in anger, everyone in the classroom just stops talking because it's scary, and it's scary because no one expected it. Now, had that quiet boy been someone that gets angry a lot then the bully would expect them to get angry, they would've kept bullying said person because they predicted an outburst. Not the best comparison but the only one I could come up with.
Too much cursing really, it takes away a lot of impact from the story. Cursing overall is fine, but it's usually used few and far between to show frustration. Listen closely, what's scarier/more impactful? someone that rarely curses and acts nice to most starts cursing or something that curses all the time curses again? the obvious answer is the guy that rarely curses.
It's like when the quiet guy that gets bullied and usually takes it suddenly explodes in anger, everyone in the classroom just stops talking because it's scary, and it's scary because no one expected it. Now, had that quiet boy been someone that gets angry a lot then the bully would expect them to get angry, they would've kept bullying said person because they predicted an outburst. Not the best comparison but the only one I could come up with.
7/12/2020 c4 Guest
I like the premise. Jason has potential to be a well written character, but be careful that he doesn’t Gary-Stu his way through everything.
Keep working at it.
I like the premise. Jason has potential to be a well written character, but be careful that he doesn’t Gary-Stu his way through everything.
Keep working at it.
7/11/2020 c3 Guest
Read all three chapters and I like it so far, I will be watching to see where it goes. Its nice to see that an actual good guy other than Tyrion is in house Lannister.
Read all three chapters and I like it so far, I will be watching to see where it goes. Its nice to see that an actual good guy other than Tyrion is in house Lannister.