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7/9 c1 Guest
Are u going to put u storys in fanfiction thanks
7/10 c1 burglover421
I'm sorry it has taken so long to review but another fandom I am a part of has suffered a tragedy. I love the story so far except for Angela and Tommy which I hope disappear quickly. I hope Sean breaks up with Angela. Thank you for the update
7/9 c1 5gemmaNCISfan
Okay I got lost reading that, good start but things were in blocks and lines were cut half way though for new lines.
Words aren't written right, at one point you called Jane a 'he' and the apostrophes (". ") were in the wrong places.

Also whats all this down at the end with Tommy if he had done that to Maura in the show when she clearly didn't want a hug, Jane would of punched him or at least pusheed him off also Angela would not allow that kind of behaviour to a woman, maybe rethink over how this story goes

Liled the start tho

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