for Escalating Reincarnation11/5/2021 c5 Guest
ah this is fun lia tan,were you planning for her to be amy?
ah this is fun lia tan,were you planning for her to be amy?
2/28/2021 c5 
17Just an IsekaI writer
I have mixed emotions when I found that the nexr chapter is missing...
17Just an IsekaI writerI have mixed emotions when I found that the nexr chapter is missing...
10/22/2020 c1 Guest
Does he now she has magic. The only good point about himwas his magic power trained from being a baby. His character was pathetic, a typical jp floor rag.
Does he now she has magic. The only good point about himwas his magic power trained from being a baby. His character was pathetic, a typical jp floor rag.
10/19/2020 c5 7Riniko22
Thank you for the new chapter, it did feel as if some of the material had been used before in another chapter and there were a few typos, but not many. I got the feeling that a few of the other readers were confusing Lia with Sarah (aka Lisa) and not Amelia (Amy, aka Panacea). I can only think that Lia's mother only used the daycare for a short period in time before leaving her with her father, Marquis when she found him.
7Riniko22Thank you for the new chapter, it did feel as if some of the material had been used before in another chapter and there were a few typos, but not many. I got the feeling that a few of the other readers were confusing Lia with Sarah (aka Lisa) and not Amelia (Amy, aka Panacea). I can only think that Lia's mother only used the daycare for a short period in time before leaving her with her father, Marquis when she found him.
10/19/2020 c5 Crescent Glaive
Hmm... If Rudeus-Taylor ever triggers, it might be a good idea to invest money into a good bunker...
Hmm... If Rudeus-Taylor ever triggers, it might be a good idea to invest money into a good bunker...
10/19/2020 c5 mynameisjoseceja
I think you got the girls name wrong if you trying to make a connection with TT her name is Sarah not Lia she changed her name to lisa when she ran away I think but good chapter posted this just to tell you I case you messed up
I think you got the girls name wrong if you trying to make a connection with TT her name is Sarah not Lia she changed her name to lisa when she ran away I think but good chapter posted this just to tell you I case you messed up
10/5/2020 c1 Diamond of soul
menstruation, let's have compassion for this gai
menstruation, let's have compassion for this gai
10/3/2020 c4 victor janus
It's not usually a problem because most stories are from Taylor's POV, but there is something to keep in mind since this taylor would pay more attention to the people around her. In the Danny interlude near the beginning of worm it's mentioned that he had a titanic fight with Annette and that was the last time he saw her. We know that she died on the phone with Taylor so it's likely that it wasn't just the cellphone distraction but also the fact that she'd just ran away from Danny.
So don't know if it will be butterflied away or not, but keep in mind Danny and Annette do have some troubles in their relationship. Most people don't usually write in this time period of worm so I thought i should bring it up.
Still I like the story so keep up the hard work.
It's not usually a problem because most stories are from Taylor's POV, but there is something to keep in mind since this taylor would pay more attention to the people around her. In the Danny interlude near the beginning of worm it's mentioned that he had a titanic fight with Annette and that was the last time he saw her. We know that she died on the phone with Taylor so it's likely that it wasn't just the cellphone distraction but also the fact that she'd just ran away from Danny.
So don't know if it will be butterflied away or not, but keep in mind Danny and Annette do have some troubles in their relationship. Most people don't usually write in this time period of worm so I thought i should bring it up.
Still I like the story so keep up the hard work.
8/30/2020 c4 Guest
Thanks for the chapter
... is Taylor gonna have a new sibling?
Thanks for the chapter
... is Taylor gonna have a new sibling?
8/30/2020 c3 Hmm23
They should set Taylor be in Anne class It would solve a few problems
They should set Taylor be in Anne class It would solve a few problems
8/30/2020 c4 JohnWaxman
Nice interlude with heartwarming family moments.
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I don't really think that Rudeus would have reacted so badly to the change in gender but then again with 2 wifes (Silphy and Roxy) and a husband (Eris) I suppose he would be protective of his p*nis. He has lost limbs before after all.
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Sigh... Believe it or not I am proud to not be more bulgar...
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Anyways! Annette should have greeted Danny with accusations that their daughter cheated in the exam just not to get a better score.
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About Rudylor inteligence this is just my headcannon and fell free to ignore it but with how easily he memorized new information and learned various lenguages in his second life and a remark that such task were easier in his childhood gave me the impresion that his soul retains his knowledge from his previous life(s) and his new brain easily absorved the new information. Meaning that he can learn things not that he can apply all he learn.
Nice interlude with heartwarming family moments.
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I don't really think that Rudeus would have reacted so badly to the change in gender but then again with 2 wifes (Silphy and Roxy) and a husband (Eris) I suppose he would be protective of his p*nis. He has lost limbs before after all.
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Sigh... Believe it or not I am proud to not be more bulgar...
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Anyways! Annette should have greeted Danny with accusations that their daughter cheated in the exam just not to get a better score.
.
About Rudylor inteligence this is just my headcannon and fell free to ignore it but with how easily he memorized new information and learned various lenguages in his second life and a remark that such task were easier in his childhood gave me the impresion that his soul retains his knowledge from his previous life(s) and his new brain easily absorved the new information. Meaning that he can learn things not that he can apply all he learn.
8/30/2020 c4 Wayne's old hat
Sweet interlude with an interesting POV for Danny.
I am interested in what sort of school life Rudylor will have, what friends/teachers he will encounter and what will he learn. Heck, depending on wich school he goes he may come across some future capes (not necessarily as classmates).
On the other side of the coin such interactions may turn tedious or fill the story with OC that will be forgotten and/or ignored when cannon arrives so it may be for the best if you just timeskip most of it.
Sweet interlude with an interesting POV for Danny.
I am interested in what sort of school life Rudylor will have, what friends/teachers he will encounter and what will he learn. Heck, depending on wich school he goes he may come across some future capes (not necessarily as classmates).
On the other side of the coin such interactions may turn tedious or fill the story with OC that will be forgotten and/or ignored when cannon arrives so it may be for the best if you just timeskip most of it.
8/30/2020 c4 Milpy
another chapter of nothing happening and filler.
this time focusing on an issue that no one is interested that a character that nobody cares about has. trully the pinacle of writting.
is this story going anywere or are we going to have to sit though 100k words of pure graham cracker flavour storytelling before anything happens?
another chapter of nothing happening and filler.
this time focusing on an issue that no one is interested that a character that nobody cares about has. trully the pinacle of writting.
is this story going anywere or are we going to have to sit though 100k words of pure graham cracker flavour storytelling before anything happens?