for Escalating Reincarnation8/23/2020 c3 Guest
Thanks for the chapter!
I wonder if Rudylor will enter Arcadia instead of Winslow now? With Rudylor taking advanced lessons and skipping grades, it’d be cumbersome for her to attend Winslow with Emma like the original Taylor did since Canon Taylor only went to Winslow to be with Emma, even though her middle school grades were good enough for Arcadia (my Worm knowledge is spotty after so long, so I may be wrong about this bit).
Thanks for the chapter!
I wonder if Rudylor will enter Arcadia instead of Winslow now? With Rudylor taking advanced lessons and skipping grades, it’d be cumbersome for her to attend Winslow with Emma like the original Taylor did since Canon Taylor only went to Winslow to be with Emma, even though her middle school grades were good enough for Arcadia (my Worm knowledge is spotty after so long, so I may be wrong about this bit).
8/23/2020 c3 Guest
It's been explained that God is not the source of all evil in the series, and that something in the Universe is causing God to be Evil. Okay, um, what could be so evil that it makes God (y'know, the guy who made everything) evil?
Even worse. According to Christianity, God's very nature is love itself. What in the name of everything holy could possibly have corrupted love incarnate?
Maybe too many people hating and killing in their name? Worse: believing that they do good and what they feel is love? This world runs on Gods Need Prayer Badly. - Humans Are Bastards.
However, this could also be a reflection of exactly what's wrong with him creating Knight Templar Angels as well. As SMTII makes it clear that the Archangels' own psychotic belief can give rise to a fake YHVH. If their own belief can create a fake one, then doesn't it stand to reason that angels in general can make God fit their view of their creator?
It's been explained that God is not the source of all evil in the series, and that something in the Universe is causing God to be Evil. Okay, um, what could be so evil that it makes God (y'know, the guy who made everything) evil?
Even worse. According to Christianity, God's very nature is love itself. What in the name of everything holy could possibly have corrupted love incarnate?
Maybe too many people hating and killing in their name? Worse: believing that they do good and what they feel is love? This world runs on Gods Need Prayer Badly. - Humans Are Bastards.
However, this could also be a reflection of exactly what's wrong with him creating Knight Templar Angels as well. As SMTII makes it clear that the Archangels' own psychotic belief can give rise to a fake YHVH. If their own belief can create a fake one, then doesn't it stand to reason that angels in general can make God fit their view of their creator?
8/25/2020 c3 
2FerunaLutelou
BB has a university? As far as I know it only has a college, and that's where she was teaching, no? If you get a map of BB after the Leviathan attack, then the college should be somewhere near that huge lake in the middle of the city.
2FerunaLutelouBB has a university? As far as I know it only has a college, and that's where she was teaching, no? If you get a map of BB after the Leviathan attack, then the college should be somewhere near that huge lake in the middle of the city.
8/23/2020 c3 Wayne's old hat
I like what you did with the chapters, it makes for a more fun read.
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About this chapter, good for you that comment on him seeing Emma and Ann as siblings. I know that many people found hus attitude to Silphy disgusting but I blame that to Japan view on those issues and it's a shame since the rest is a really solid novel. Regardless is good that I dont't have to worry about that here.
It is also neat that Rudylor is taking education seriously one thing I would add is him learning lenguages, in his preivious life he learned since it seemed an important skill. In this earth bet is more complicated but since he already know japanese and english he may ne interested in broad that a little.
I like what you did with the chapters, it makes for a more fun read.
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About this chapter, good for you that comment on him seeing Emma and Ann as siblings. I know that many people found hus attitude to Silphy disgusting but I blame that to Japan view on those issues and it's a shame since the rest is a really solid novel. Regardless is good that I dont't have to worry about that here.
It is also neat that Rudylor is taking education seriously one thing I would add is him learning lenguages, in his preivious life he learned since it seemed an important skill. In this earth bet is more complicated but since he already know japanese and english he may ne interested in broad that a little.
8/15/2020 c8 Guest
Thank you for another chapter of 1k words of worm wiki copypasta
Truly the pinnacle of reading
Either get on with the plot or abandon the story, at this point every chapter is a summary of the worm wiki.
Thank you for another chapter of 1k words of worm wiki copypasta
Truly the pinnacle of reading
Either get on with the plot or abandon the story, at this point every chapter is a summary of the worm wiki.
8/16/2020 c8 JohnWaxman
It was very little at the end of the chapter but it made me think of another skill our protagonist has yet to train. I think Rudylor need to weaponize her cuteness (while it last), as Rudeusnhe had daughters, grandaughters, nieces and other not blood related little girls to study so he should make use of it on unsuspecting adults in the future.
It was very little at the end of the chapter but it made me think of another skill our protagonist has yet to train. I think Rudylor need to weaponize her cuteness (while it last), as Rudeusnhe had daughters, grandaughters, nieces and other not blood related little girls to study so he should make use of it on unsuspecting adults in the future.
8/9/2020 c7 NotAGuest
Damn, Rudylor gonna give Thinkers aneurisms. A 100 year old Japanese Isekai magic nobleman alien* husbando who is an alternate Earth refugee in an American girl’s body.
...Gives me conniptions.
*technically Rudylor is a body snatching alien on a multiversal vacation from Earth Prime (NEETboi) to Human World (Rudeus) to Earth Bet (Taylor)
Concerning the chapter length and wait time change, as long as you continue the story it’s all cool. Just don’t push yourself too hard and burn out. I’d rather have slow updates than the story being put on INDEFINITE HIATUS (oh the horror! Mercy! Spare us! Grant us eyes Kos-some-say-Kosm!)
Damn, Rudylor gonna give Thinkers aneurisms. A 100 year old Japanese Isekai magic nobleman alien* husbando who is an alternate Earth refugee in an American girl’s body.
...Gives me conniptions.
*technically Rudylor is a body snatching alien on a multiversal vacation from Earth Prime (NEETboi) to Human World (Rudeus) to Earth Bet (Taylor)
Concerning the chapter length and wait time change, as long as you continue the story it’s all cool. Just don’t push yourself too hard and burn out. I’d rather have slow updates than the story being put on INDEFINITE HIATUS (oh the horror! Mercy! Spare us! Grant us eyes Kos-some-say-Kosm!)
8/9/2020 c7 Guest
interesting story so far, I'll be sure to eagerly await more chapters.
interesting story so far, I'll be sure to eagerly await more chapters.
8/9/2020 c1 Lazy
Gender wage gap, abuse against women, sexual discrimination etc. TF was all of this Rudys main concern would be that he no longer could do the deed, not any of this and as a side note do not insert political opinions in places they do not belong and do it so lázily. The classic show it dont tell it.
Gender wage gap, abuse against women, sexual discrimination etc. TF was all of this Rudys main concern would be that he no longer could do the deed, not any of this and as a side note do not insert political opinions in places they do not belong and do it so lázily. The classic show it dont tell it.
8/9/2020 c7 xerad
Ok so rudy just got told of a path (miko flashback) thats not gonna help his theory on the endbringers being there for her also now know about the S9 (just around their visit to BB) just after being told is ok to kill them because they are monster instead of villians ...
XD even if nothing happen she gonna be on edge lol waiting for foretold dead battle XD
On the good side look like fortuna is alive again eh if she stay around the whole world will be like 200% better assuming she THINK and plan creatively instead of being a drone for her power
Ok so rudy just got told of a path (miko flashback) thats not gonna help his theory on the endbringers being there for her also now know about the S9 (just around their visit to BB) just after being told is ok to kill them because they are monster instead of villians ...
XD even if nothing happen she gonna be on edge lol waiting for foretold dead battle XD
On the good side look like fortuna is alive again eh if she stay around the whole world will be like 200% better assuming she THINK and plan creatively instead of being a drone for her power
8/9/2020 c7 JohnWaxman
First of, I am all for longer chapters even if the wait is a little longer, the story and the way you write is really good but don't feel that you need to fill a quota or something I much rather read something you enjoyed writing.
About this chapter it is undoubtedly great; but maybe the timing was a little off?
I mean, I am still getting up to speed in Worm but, in his previous world Rudeus didn't meet a mysterious manipulative figure that can predict the future until the mana calamity. That said there are many interesting bits and analogies to be drawn.
There's the obvious like he's seen as a boy and with Hitogami he always saw himself in his first body but also that he may be able to alter Contessa's paths, that can be simply because he isn't from around here or because he weared a bracelet that hide him from a similar ability for over 50 years.
On a personal level I can't express enough how great is to see you capture one of Rudeus greates features for me, the actions that for him are minor encounters can be a life-changing experience for the other party. That's something I loved reading about him and am happy to see it again.
Final thing and not a reflection of the chapter but I had to stop a moment to digest that in this world the mysterious figure that uses her ability to see the future to manipulate people to get what she wants, even if her objective is nobler that Hitogami's, is if not friends at least allied with a man regarded as the most powerfull with acces to pretty much any power he may need even if not all at once.
First of, I am all for longer chapters even if the wait is a little longer, the story and the way you write is really good but don't feel that you need to fill a quota or something I much rather read something you enjoyed writing.
About this chapter it is undoubtedly great; but maybe the timing was a little off?
I mean, I am still getting up to speed in Worm but, in his previous world Rudeus didn't meet a mysterious manipulative figure that can predict the future until the mana calamity. That said there are many interesting bits and analogies to be drawn.
There's the obvious like he's seen as a boy and with Hitogami he always saw himself in his first body but also that he may be able to alter Contessa's paths, that can be simply because he isn't from around here or because he weared a bracelet that hide him from a similar ability for over 50 years.
On a personal level I can't express enough how great is to see you capture one of Rudeus greates features for me, the actions that for him are minor encounters can be a life-changing experience for the other party. That's something I loved reading about him and am happy to see it again.
Final thing and not a reflection of the chapter but I had to stop a moment to digest that in this world the mysterious figure that uses her ability to see the future to manipulate people to get what she wants, even if her objective is nobler that Hitogami's, is if not friends at least allied with a man regarded as the most powerfull with acces to pretty much any power he may need even if not all at once.
8/3/2020 c6 Guest
So, one question keeps bothering me - why exactly Taylor was chosen to be replaced ? Sice this 'reincarnation' effectively killed her and inserted another character in her place. There won't be any experiences that actually made Taylor well... Taylor. So outside of interacting with some Worm characters (which could've been done with just a Character Insert) I don't really see the point in showing MC as a child.
So, one question keeps bothering me - why exactly Taylor was chosen to be replaced ? Sice this 'reincarnation' effectively killed her and inserted another character in her place. There won't be any experiences that actually made Taylor well... Taylor. So outside of interacting with some Worm characters (which could've been done with just a Character Insert) I don't really see the point in showing MC as a child.