for When Fiction Becomes Reality3/9 c9 Joshbbeer
I give up on this shit you have made his personality so weak and bitchy it’s unbelievable
I give up on this shit you have made his personality so weak and bitchy it’s unbelievable
12/18/2021 c25 
5Tenma Sosei
Yeah, I'm done. You just had to make a dumb pairing of Shizuka and Sai. Just no. I'm out.
5Tenma SoseiYeah, I'm done. You just had to make a dumb pairing of Shizuka and Sai. Just no. I'm out.
10/27/2021 c9 corjca1
slut you aint his sister your family abanden him full stop your slut of a mother and a ponse of a father listing to the pervert
slut you aint his sister your family abanden him full stop your slut of a mother and a ponse of a father listing to the pervert
10/7/2021 c34 Guest
From chap 30 the story plot just gone rushing that it's turning into good into a pure shit story with no proper plot. Bluntly saying. Which i guess already happen . Discontinue this shit of thing . If this were a book for sale. With 30-34 chap it become absolute trash
From chap 30 the story plot just gone rushing that it's turning into good into a pure shit story with no proper plot. Bluntly saying. Which i guess already happen . Discontinue this shit of thing . If this were a book for sale. With 30-34 chap it become absolute trash