
10/30/2020 c2
9Ingenious Waterfowl
Yay! I liked this chapter, especially how Hiram was so chill about being arrested.

Yay! I liked this chapter, especially how Hiram was so chill about being arrested.
10/30/2020 c1 Ingenious Waterfowl
This was good! I really liked your phrasing and descriptions, very well done.
This was good! I really liked your phrasing and descriptions, very well done.
7/14/2020 c1 cecilia.clare
Happy Birthday! This chapter was amazing! I really like the direction of the story and the dialogue really flows. Amazing work!
Happy Birthday! This chapter was amazing! I really like the direction of the story and the dialogue really flows. Amazing work!
7/14/2020 c1 Orrelious
This was really good!
I can't wait for more
This was really good!
I can't wait for more