for The Lust of Gryffindors6/12 c4 Guest
So far ,so good,looking forward to the story continuing to unfold.
So far ,so good,looking forward to the story continuing to unfold.
6/9 c22 gj
your a fucking unbelievable writer mate honestly you Def have to write more non Canon books the way you make the smut fit into a imaginary plot is amazing and the noncanon aspect is so good you make everything fit together smoothly with very little if not no errors or plot holes I've read this whole book like five times already I would have happily payed for this book/fic I saw overwhelming positive reviews on tictok and I've read alot of hp smut fics and nun of them hit the same the plot is so good and your imagination is truly in believable I couldn't right this in a thousand lifetimes I have a suggestion tho you should write fics/books about his first years at Hogwarts that aren't Canon or write this same story but a different plot with the same pride aspect too it I know how draining it would be as someone who tried to get into writing but thought it was to hard I'm not sure if you will read all of this if at all and sorry for any mid Grammer English isn't my first language I'm looking forward to your upcoming fics lobe was you did here
your a fucking unbelievable writer mate honestly you Def have to write more non Canon books the way you make the smut fit into a imaginary plot is amazing and the noncanon aspect is so good you make everything fit together smoothly with very little if not no errors or plot holes I've read this whole book like five times already I would have happily payed for this book/fic I saw overwhelming positive reviews on tictok and I've read alot of hp smut fics and nun of them hit the same the plot is so good and your imagination is truly in believable I couldn't right this in a thousand lifetimes I have a suggestion tho you should write fics/books about his first years at Hogwarts that aren't Canon or write this same story but a different plot with the same pride aspect too it I know how draining it would be as someone who tried to get into writing but thought it was to hard I'm not sure if you will read all of this if at all and sorry for any mid Grammer English isn't my first language I'm looking forward to your upcoming fics lobe was you did here
5/30 c45 Guest
I hated the daphene and tracey part, as it was so boring
I hated the daphene and tracey part, as it was so boring
5/12 c19 Guest
make more sexy stuff
make more sexy stuff
4/28 c28 Anonymous
Oh Ginny! I liked you when you were sweet and innocent
Oh Ginny! I liked you when you were sweet and innocent
4/17 c12 Anonymous
Nope. Bad idea Hermione. Remember your little talk with Madame Pomfrey?
Nope. Bad idea Hermione. Remember your little talk with Madame Pomfrey?
4/17 c11 Anonymous
Good job with the Scottish! Can you please try to cut down on the swear words? Thanks.
I assume Cho’s suggestion for a partner was Luna Lovegood. I guess I’ll soon see.
Good job with the Scottish! Can you please try to cut down on the swear words? Thanks.
I assume Cho’s suggestion for a partner was Luna Lovegood. I guess I’ll soon see.
4/17 c10 Anonymous
Drunk Katie was pretty cute, but please, no gay.
Drunk Katie was pretty cute, but please, no gay.
3/4 c54 veale728
This story was a goddamn trip and a half. It was one of the best-written stories I've ever seen here! And the smut was very well written also! 10/10 story on all accounts.
This story was a goddamn trip and a half. It was one of the best-written stories I've ever seen here! And the smut was very well written also! 10/10 story on all accounts.
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