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9/27/2020 c44 Elsa Jay
This has been a brilliant read from the beginning. The end is nicely tied up with Virgil and Penny finally getting together, all that's left is for Alan to 'get laid'.
9/26/2020 c44 islandsandstars
Thankyou for an amazing story!
I have loved reading this and I'm sad it's over.
It's been brilliant!
9/26/2020 c44 408JanetM74
*sighs contentedly*

An absolutely fantastic ending to a wonderfully epic trilogy.

I have enjoyed this ride immensely.

Thank you.
9/26/2020 c44 Guest
Excellent
9/26/2020 c44 16LMC25
Awww what a lovely ending. Such a great story I will miss it but I like rereading my favourites. So funny alan needs to get laid omg. Glad virgil got his happy ending too. I'm sure Jeff will come round eventually especially if Scott remembers to explain she saved John the first time round too!
9/26/2020 c43 Bubzchoc
Brilliant chapters
9/26/2020 c43 408JanetM74
Aww.

An excellent fight, freeing a friend, justice and going home.

Beautiful.

Typical Alan. Can’t do as he’s told!
9/26/2020 c43 16LMC25
Lol the end! His fathers going to have a few choice words for him! What an excellent chapter with angel going all daredevil (I love daredevil). It was brilliant the action and the pace was spot on. I love Scott's confidence in her abilities too. I'm sure Alan might get into trouble later too!
9/25/2020 c42 islandsandstars
Alan! Not little Alan!
Omg, brilliant chapter!
Please update soon because I'm so desperate to find out how this goes!
Great job!
9/25/2020 c42 408JanetM74
Wow! A cracking chapter, full of action.

Saved Scott.
Dealt with Ethan.
Romance!

And then...bam! Plot twist and cliffhanger!

Arrrrrrrgh!

Loved it!
9/25/2020 c42 Harlow
Sorry I've been commenting late. My life has been pretty hectic. Good chapter, and I can't wait to see Jeff and Virgil's reaction to Angel\Annie. One of my besties nickname in real life is Annie too.
9/25/2020 c42 16LMC25
Ohhhhhhh where do I BEGIN! Man this chapter was a complete ride of everything j wanted to read. Action, rescues, scott and Angel's sweet moment, people getting their comeuppance. Scott was amazing (I'm trying to review spoiler free here), Gordon was epic and then that cliff hanger at the end! I have every confidence in John. I'm rooting for that dark horse to save them all as well as Cat obviously ;-)
9/24/2020 c41 islandsandstars
Loved it!
I'm so excited for the next chapter!
:)
9/24/2020 c41 408JanetM74
Things are getting intense...whew! Ethan...you’re in trouble now!

Scott - hang on! Help is coming!

(And Jeff and Virgil!)
9/24/2020 c41 16LMC25
Ah man soooooo good! I loved it! They have found their rhythm as a team, john needs to give himself more credit! Poor Scott I hope Angel gets there in time! Nice touch with the explanation of the hoods control over kyrano too
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