for Baptism by Fire5/28 c27 GeekyGirl19
AawwwI hope you are doing alright. i can't remember the dates for this story and if its completed...not sure if you are still on here but i hope you are doing better and are happy!
AawwwI hope you are doing alright. i can't remember the dates for this story and if its completed...not sure if you are still on here but i hope you are doing better and are happy!
5/28 c26 GeekyGirl19
AAAAHHH OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH! IT HAPPENED! IT FINALLY HAPPENED! I am OBSESSED!
AAAAHHH OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH! IT HAPPENED! IT FINALLY HAPPENED! I am OBSESSED!
5/28 c16 GeekyGirl19
I have been binge reading this every chance i get for the past few days! I am in love with this story and my gosh this chapter is amazing! really just the end has me smiling so hard! He stole the book for her and he is totally falling for her and she's falling for him and they could be such a power couple! im nust so in love with this story!
I have been binge reading this every chance i get for the past few days! I am in love with this story and my gosh this chapter is amazing! really just the end has me smiling so hard! He stole the book for her and he is totally falling for her and she's falling for him and they could be such a power couple! im nust so in love with this story!
9/2/2022 c20 Guest
I love your story, it kept me awake several hours because I was so curious about what will happen. However, I think there are some small things that feel a bit contradictory. For instance this chapter: you always say that Trixie is very religious and rushing the marriage with Tommy is because a catholic girl wouldn't dream of living with a man without being married. And the next morning she tells Grace that they rushed the wedding because she is pregnant? While before she told her that she is saving herself for AFTER the marriage? It doesn't make much sense to me ... Also, she keeps telling different stories to different people: she is either fiance to Tommy, either not, either their accountant, either just an ordinary girl with no connection to their business ... I think the lies should be consistent, or else it would raise suspicions, because everybody in the neighbourhood would know the truth about her, and most likely the cops would find out.
Nevetheless, it's a very nice story and I am very anxious to find the ending
I love your story, it kept me awake several hours because I was so curious about what will happen. However, I think there are some small things that feel a bit contradictory. For instance this chapter: you always say that Trixie is very religious and rushing the marriage with Tommy is because a catholic girl wouldn't dream of living with a man without being married. And the next morning she tells Grace that they rushed the wedding because she is pregnant? While before she told her that she is saving herself for AFTER the marriage? It doesn't make much sense to me ... Also, she keeps telling different stories to different people: she is either fiance to Tommy, either not, either their accountant, either just an ordinary girl with no connection to their business ... I think the lies should be consistent, or else it would raise suspicions, because everybody in the neighbourhood would know the truth about her, and most likely the cops would find out.
Nevetheless, it's a very nice story and I am very anxious to find the ending
7/31/2022 c35 Guest
Really wonderful writing and character development. Thank you so much for sharing~!
Really wonderful writing and character development. Thank you so much for sharing~!
11/23/2021 c33 
1LifePrice1412
to be honest with everybody this is one of the main reason why I don't like Ada. she brought her baby to a gunfight. her baby that's all I have to say.
1LifePrice1412to be honest with everybody this is one of the main reason why I don't like Ada. she brought her baby to a gunfight. her baby that's all I have to say.
11/23/2021 c21 LifePrice1412
I never got why they blame Tommy for this. I mean she was literally pregnant. not beginning stage pregnant but at the end of her term pregnant. he only asked her to sit down. everything else she mad okay but get mad because he was not want her to dance while she's heavily pregnant. that was just bitching. I also did not have she told everybody Trixie business like that.
I never got why they blame Tommy for this. I mean she was literally pregnant. not beginning stage pregnant but at the end of her term pregnant. he only asked her to sit down. everything else she mad okay but get mad because he was not want her to dance while she's heavily pregnant. that was just bitching. I also did not have she told everybody Trixie business like that.
11/23/2021 c10 LifePrice1412
I think Tommy's right. and that's just not me fangirling over him. It what he says is right Ada didn't have no future with Freddy.
I think Tommy's right. and that's just not me fangirling over him. It what he says is right Ada didn't have no future with Freddy.
11/23/2021 c9 LifePrice1412
Is I'm the only person who thought the whole thing between Ada and Frankie was stupid. like you know your brother don't like him and then you know that he's a communist he will bring nothing but trouble with him. always. her sleeping with him was kind of stupid. understand the wedding because she didn't want her kid to be a bastard
Is I'm the only person who thought the whole thing between Ada and Frankie was stupid. like you know your brother don't like him and then you know that he's a communist he will bring nothing but trouble with him. always. her sleeping with him was kind of stupid. understand the wedding because she didn't want her kid to be a bastard
8/2/2021 c34 NotSureHowToMingle
This chapter is the intro to the rest of the series, I wonder if Beatrice's presence would change events or not further on
This chapter is the intro to the rest of the series, I wonder if Beatrice's presence would change events or not further on