
11/19/2021 c5 Mattroxursoul
I like rhe concept. But trying to tell entire battles is not really a good medium for story telling. It introduces far to many characters and splits the narrative. Usuallly best to limit large scenes to pov of just a couple perspectives.
I like rhe concept. But trying to tell entire battles is not really a good medium for story telling. It introduces far to many characters and splits the narrative. Usuallly best to limit large scenes to pov of just a couple perspectives.
10/27/2021 c10 Guest
Fuck you
Fuck you
1/7/2021 c1 TragicFiction
Good start. Can't wait to see ahsoka
I am curious to see how this will continue since most of the enemy officials are part of this order
Good start. Can't wait to see ahsoka
I am curious to see how this will continue since most of the enemy officials are part of this order
1/2/2021 c2
9Terry Terry4
as cool as it is i feels very weird imagining star trek enterprise class ships escorted by stargate Daedulas mixing Xwings F302s mixing timelines its weird but ok so far

as cool as it is i feels very weird imagining star trek enterprise class ships escorted by stargate Daedulas mixing Xwings F302s mixing timelines its weird but ok so far
1/1/2021 c9 ChunkyFunkyMunky
Err, you said “none other” twice in the same sentence, so it sounds very weird.
Err, you said “none other” twice in the same sentence, so it sounds very weird.
1/1/2021 c1 maryej483
I have a feeling the Jedi Council would want to capture Anakin and demand answers. Knowing him, he probably would free the clones who mostly hate the Clone Wars to begin with. I can't wait to read more of this.
I have a feeling the Jedi Council would want to capture Anakin and demand answers. Knowing him, he probably would free the clones who mostly hate the Clone Wars to begin with. I can't wait to read more of this.