3/9/2021 c9 Guest
Pretty good story, the chapters are a bit short though.
I hope Harry remembers Alya Black given he's going to Sirius Blacks trial. He could say he saw a girl looking at the Leaky Cauldron and heard one of the adults with her calling the name Alya Black to get her attention. Might ask Sirius if he has kids. Even if she isn't Sirius's kid it might be worth noting.
Thanks for writing!
Pretty good story, the chapters are a bit short though.
I hope Harry remembers Alya Black given he's going to Sirius Blacks trial. He could say he saw a girl looking at the Leaky Cauldron and heard one of the adults with her calling the name Alya Black to get her attention. Might ask Sirius if he has kids. Even if she isn't Sirius's kid it might be worth noting.
Thanks for writing!
3/9/2021 c7 Guest
Amusing chapter, Harry's gotta stop ragging on his luck. With his life he shouldn't even consider bad luck tbh.
Amusing chapter, Harry's gotta stop ragging on his luck. With his life he shouldn't even consider bad luck tbh.
3/9/2021 c6 E
Hope you don't love you're one OC too much and break the story over idolising her. That's the problem most authors have with OC's they create.
Hope you don't love you're one OC too much and break the story over idolising her. That's the problem most authors have with OC's they create.
3/9/2021 c5 E
I thought Harry was suprisingly distrustful but not completely out of character and his past.
I thought Harry was suprisingly distrustful but not completely out of character and his past.
3/9/2021 c4 E
Enjoying the story. Glad Harry and his grandad met up, it's a plot I've rarely come across. The hunter's guild is interesting and to explain the notion of Greater Good when it comes to Dumbledore it's essentially similar to Kiritsuga's philophy in fate. To save 10 at times 1 must be sacrificed, it's the philosophy of a general, a war time leader. It's not wrong but the immorality of it comes into the fact that Harry was even considered to be a sacrifice despite his youth. People who live in peace like to pretend that their heroes don't get their hands dirty and that their side has the moral higher gound but generally every side leaves their people in ignorance of how little differentiates them from their enemies. Because of that the side with an actual moral high ground is likely to be portrayed as the most morally bankrupt simply because it makes an enemy of those dirtier than themselves, the majority.
The most legitimate negative prespective about Dumbledore I believe is that while he's a good person, he's too quick to condition those belonging to the light to sacrifice themselves while trying to extend a hand of reform to the dark. Essentially it's like sacrificcing one good person in the hopes that 1 bad person will become good without a garuntee.
At least that's how I see it.
Enjoying the story. Glad Harry and his grandad met up, it's a plot I've rarely come across. The hunter's guild is interesting and to explain the notion of Greater Good when it comes to Dumbledore it's essentially similar to Kiritsuga's philophy in fate. To save 10 at times 1 must be sacrificed, it's the philosophy of a general, a war time leader. It's not wrong but the immorality of it comes into the fact that Harry was even considered to be a sacrifice despite his youth. People who live in peace like to pretend that their heroes don't get their hands dirty and that their side has the moral higher gound but generally every side leaves their people in ignorance of how little differentiates them from their enemies. Because of that the side with an actual moral high ground is likely to be portrayed as the most morally bankrupt simply because it makes an enemy of those dirtier than themselves, the majority.
The most legitimate negative prespective about Dumbledore I believe is that while he's a good person, he's too quick to condition those belonging to the light to sacrifice themselves while trying to extend a hand of reform to the dark. Essentially it's like sacrificcing one good person in the hopes that 1 bad person will become good without a garuntee.
At least that's how I see it.
3/9/2021 c2 E
So far thing's have been written well though I do have some concerns. The Harry genderbend in the previous version of this story, honestly doing something like that on a whim has me nervous for the rest of the story. Even for a child of Harry's age having his body and identity changed like that would have been incredibly traumatic and that's not to mention how he'd view it or himself/herself especially with the background of being called freak throughout his life and his already unpleasent childhood.
Glad you rethought that on this version.
You mentioned an Alya and an Emily in your ending Authors Note, they don't appear in this chapter so it might be something from your older version of the story.
So far thing's have been written well though I do have some concerns. The Harry genderbend in the previous version of this story, honestly doing something like that on a whim has me nervous for the rest of the story. Even for a child of Harry's age having his body and identity changed like that would have been incredibly traumatic and that's not to mention how he'd view it or himself/herself especially with the background of being called freak throughout his life and his already unpleasent childhood.
Glad you rethought that on this version.
You mentioned an Alya and an Emily in your ending Authors Note, they don't appear in this chapter so it might be something from your older version of the story.
2/13/2021 c9 StrangestQuark
Daaaamn, Dumbledoreis over 7 times stronger then Charlus? That's some serious shit for sure, even without taking into account that he is more then 100 times stronger then Harry... I look forward to seeing him climb that difference. Thanks for sharing and update soon!
Daaaamn, Dumbledoreis over 7 times stronger then Charlus? That's some serious shit for sure, even without taking into account that he is more then 100 times stronger then Harry... I look forward to seeing him climb that difference. Thanks for sharing and update soon!
2/8/2021 c8 Guest
Ive always waited as long as possible to distribute my skill/perk points. It just there so easy to get in the beginning, that its just a waste to spend them when your basically in safe zones or have stronger party members... Sometimes I can even make it to almost level 15 to spend most of my points.
Ive always waited as long as possible to distribute my skill/perk points. It just there so easy to get in the beginning, that its just a waste to spend them when your basically in safe zones or have stronger party members... Sometimes I can even make it to almost level 15 to spend most of my points.
2/8/2021 c5 Guest
What sword!
What sword!