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7/12 c9 5BookishFlyingGecko
Yooo I was just checking this story last night because I remembered you said you would update in early July. Loved it! Super intense, and I liked how you paralleled the scene from Winter with Cinder and Levana both holding the guns. I totally did not see Cinder's glamouring of Pearl coming! And of course we get our first glimpse of Jacin and Kinney. So excited to see how the next part goes down! (Also brief self-promo, I've started a TLC/Percy Jackson crossover if you're interested in that :) )
5/10 c8 BookishFlyingGecko
(thought I reviewed but it must have been in my head) Oh hO we have a reveal now, I see. I really don't think Pearl knows what she's gotten herself into (and I'm wondering HOW she did). And I have a feeling it's all going to be for naught, anyway; it's not like Levana is going to actually give Pearl the antidote (unless she still has some use for her. I love how much effort Cinder is putting into ignoring her feelings for Kai, it's so accurate and fun to read. Hopefully in this version she doesn't have to run away and become a criminal, though I guess the alternative would be becoming Levana's prisoner so maybe not. If you can't tell, I'm very excited to read the next chapter :)
5/5 c8 Guest
Really, really great story so far! You might not be the wonderful Marissa Meyer but this story comes pretty close. I especially liked the plot twists involving Pearl.
3/19 c7 BookishFlyingGecko
Yayyy another chapter! :) I'm glad you're under less stress now haha. Honestly I never thought I could consider Pearl a sympathetic character, but you've really challenged that with this story. I love all this secret-keeping everyone's doing. What is Pearl going to do if Dr. Erland can't cure Adri? Is the ballroom scene going to end up the same? Can't wait to see how it all plays out!
3/4 c6 BookishFlyingGecko
Every chapter of this gets better. Seriously. Idk what you mean about being "not really sure how to write romance," because this was spot-on with Cinder and Kai's characters. I hope you're doing well and not too stressed; I'm totally guilty of the piling-up-work thing myself. Take care of yourself, and I hope you can update soon!
1/12 c6 fangirlforever0704
OKAY BUT CINDER DODGING KAI when kai asked her on the date. the dodging was so kaider (in my opinion) absolute gold
1/5 c5 BookishFlyingGecko
Wow. This chapter went so many places I was not prepared for but I am hERE for it. Please, please update this soon! Even if you still don't have an ending in mind, I would read whatever you come up with.
12/28/2020 c3 LoveMiserables
Wow! Love this! Almost as good as the real thing. I feel like I'm reading Marissa Meyer. :)
8/27/2020 c4 guest
good job with this fic, I wish there were more storys where Peony survives
8/17/2020 c4 7Rebelsartemisa
Then if Peony lives, too I hope grandmother Scarlet and too Dr Erland... Xoxo
8/8/2020 c3 princessesdontcry
this is really good! can't wait for more! :)
7/29/2020 c2 princessesdontcry
I'm excited to see how this pans out. :)

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