
11/7/2022 c21 sinjito
You got Raan and Xen mixed up here:
"We shall see, Commander. Many things are impossible until they are done," finished Raan, leaving the plaza. Shepard hated to admit it, but Xen's words were quite true. Lots of things throughout the course of history were considered impossible until someone proved otherwise.
You got Raan and Xen mixed up here:
"We shall see, Commander. Many things are impossible until they are done," finished Raan, leaving the plaza. Shepard hated to admit it, but Xen's words were quite true. Lots of things throughout the course of history were considered impossible until someone proved otherwise.
9/12/2021 c10 Atomberry
I'm not much one to review but"I like the silence" is just perfect. from being uncomfortable with it due to the Flotilla to enjoying it, probably because she associates it with the Normandy, and thus, Shepard. you're a great writer
I'm not much one to review but"I like the silence" is just perfect. from being uncomfortable with it due to the Flotilla to enjoying it, probably because she associates it with the Normandy, and thus, Shepard. you're a great writer
12/26/2020 c14
2gedoens
Thx for thr chapter and merry christmas ( hey, in my country its still christmas)

Thx for thr chapter and merry christmas ( hey, in my country its still christmas)
11/29/2020 c13 MrLodomir
Hey, It's good to see the confession earlier than after Tali's trial, also you made that different than in game, more interesting and romantic.
Hey, It's good to see the confession earlier than after Tali's trial, also you made that different than in game, more interesting and romantic.
11/28/2020 c13
2gedoens
Works out pretty nicely. Keep at it , your chapters are always an enjoyable read.

Works out pretty nicely. Keep at it , your chapters are always an enjoyable read.
11/27/2020 c12 MrLodomir
Happy to see new chapter, especially with this DLC. DLC is really interesting, showing struggle of Shepard about destruction of ship and lost friends like Pressly.
Happy to see new chapter, especially with this DLC. DLC is really interesting, showing struggle of Shepard about destruction of ship and lost friends like Pressly.
11/20/2020 c12 Shadow Onyx 013
Good chapter and about the DLC, would have like the original crew to add some commentary when I was there. otherwise you did a good job, see ya next time
Good chapter and about the DLC, would have like the original crew to add some commentary when I was there. otherwise you did a good job, see ya next time