for Boku no Overlord8/22/2024 c8 Jibberflex
This has been a Midoriya fan-boy FF so far. Everything done is around him. I don't read FFs about Overlord characters to see them constantly hang around the original MC.
This has been a Midoriya fan-boy FF so far. Everything done is around him. I don't read FFs about Overlord characters to see them constantly hang around the original MC.
8/22/2024 c5 Jibberflex
She sighs too damn much. Whats with her depressing attitude? She comes from a dying world and gets brought to a new exciting one with Nazerick and her game character. She should be excited and happy for this opportunity but all she does is complain it seems.
She sighs too damn much. Whats with her depressing attitude? She comes from a dying world and gets brought to a new exciting one with Nazerick and her game character. She should be excited and happy for this opportunity but all she does is complain it seems.
8/6/2024 c16 Robbler
And this... is the moment I'm dropping this.
Congrats, you have committed the crime of character bending.
For one, Galadriel is disgusted with rapists. Torturing someone to the point were they agree to sleep with someone just to make it end is still rape. They still don't want to do it, they just prefer it to more pain.
Meaning: It doesn't fit her character, even as a demon Empress. You simply wanted Mirko in her harem and you chose the most uncreative way to do it.
But that's not all.
Mirko is also the character that lost 2 arms and a leg during the events of My Hero Academy and went in like it was nothing. It seems unlikely that she would break, even under the torture of Nazarick.
Once again you made it happen because you wanted her in Galadriel harem and didn't think too deeply about who this character actually is.
Little forewarning: Someone broken has problems identifying with themselves. Got did something right there. Theon Greyjoy found it hard to remember whom he used to be and even harder to portray himself as anything but broken.
Mirko can never be herself again and certainly cannot keep up the role of "Mirko" for long.
You writing is quite good, but disregarding character traits and backgrounds to make them do what you desire (character bending) is one of the worst things a writer can do to his own story.
Maybe you'll take this as what it is: Advise and an opportunity to grow. Maybe you won't.
I for one will leave now. This story can sadly offer me nothing anymore.
And this... is the moment I'm dropping this.
Congrats, you have committed the crime of character bending.
For one, Galadriel is disgusted with rapists. Torturing someone to the point were they agree to sleep with someone just to make it end is still rape. They still don't want to do it, they just prefer it to more pain.
Meaning: It doesn't fit her character, even as a demon Empress. You simply wanted Mirko in her harem and you chose the most uncreative way to do it.
But that's not all.
Mirko is also the character that lost 2 arms and a leg during the events of My Hero Academy and went in like it was nothing. It seems unlikely that she would break, even under the torture of Nazarick.
Once again you made it happen because you wanted her in Galadriel harem and didn't think too deeply about who this character actually is.
Little forewarning: Someone broken has problems identifying with themselves. Got did something right there. Theon Greyjoy found it hard to remember whom he used to be and even harder to portray himself as anything but broken.
Mirko can never be herself again and certainly cannot keep up the role of "Mirko" for long.
You writing is quite good, but disregarding character traits and backgrounds to make them do what you desire (character bending) is one of the worst things a writer can do to his own story.
Maybe you'll take this as what it is: Advise and an opportunity to grow. Maybe you won't.
I for one will leave now. This story can sadly offer me nothing anymore.
7/30/2024 c1 Guest
I thought its a boku no pico x overlord crossover when i looked at that title.
I thought its a boku no pico x overlord crossover when i looked at that title.
7/2/2024 c45 fallenryoichi
bro i just had an idea
it'd be CRAZY if you wrote a House of the Dragon x Overlord crossover with galadriel reincarnated as rhaenyra or something like that. maybe when you have to have rhaenyra marry, albedo can take their spot like in "white wolf of winterfell"
you could give her a special dragon. imagine galadriel riding a white night fury or something like that.
i just think it'd be cool to have her do what she's doing in "white lion of the red keep" in the setting of House of the Dragon instead. getting the favor of the smallfolk and important players, slowly becoming OP to outside eyes. it'd be so dope, please think about it
bro i just had an idea
it'd be CRAZY if you wrote a House of the Dragon x Overlord crossover with galadriel reincarnated as rhaenyra or something like that. maybe when you have to have rhaenyra marry, albedo can take their spot like in "white wolf of winterfell"
you could give her a special dragon. imagine galadriel riding a white night fury or something like that.
i just think it'd be cool to have her do what she's doing in "white lion of the red keep" in the setting of House of the Dragon instead. getting the favor of the smallfolk and important players, slowly becoming OP to outside eyes. it'd be so dope, please think about it
6/14/2024 c11 Guest
Another trashfic
Another trashfic
6/14/2024 c5 Guest
All of this appearing weak is annoying
All of this appearing weak is annoying
6/4/2024 c45 For'Sleep 3rd
Thanks for the chapter
Well, if you said about ending... it's kinda cliches.
Thanks for the chapter
Well, if you said about ending... it's kinda cliches.
6/4/2024 c45 Imperial warlord
Awesome chapter.
For ending is still too early to say yet. Need to wait for last one to come out.
Awesome chapter.
For ending is still too early to say yet. Need to wait for last one to come out.
6/4/2024 c45 
3RonaldM40196867
The Yakuza are old news.
I love watching Regina, Toga, and Twice.
This is my favorite chapter so far.
3RonaldM40196867The Yakuza are old news.
I love watching Regina, Toga, and Twice.
This is my favorite chapter so far.