for See No Evil (Complete)3/21 c90 LefantaAegim
One of the fanfics that not only have an ending, but is also a great one overall.
I fking love it all the way to the end, of course there are some things that might better like you said, but it's still great.
I've read this story like what, 3 or 4 times now? and it still didn't bore me, which just shows how good of a fanfic this is.
One of the fanfics that not only have an ending, but is also a great one overall.
I fking love it all the way to the end, of course there are some things that might better like you said, but it's still great.
I've read this story like what, 3 or 4 times now? and it still didn't bore me, which just shows how good of a fanfic this is.
3/19 c48 LefantaAegim
I really couldn't get enough of the moment when he really won against everyone, granted it's not a clear win because of the future battles, but dmn him being able to have all that in a day is fking amazing work.
I really couldn't get enough of the moment when he really won against everyone, granted it's not a clear win because of the future battles, but dmn him being able to have all that in a day is fking amazing work.
2/1 c44 Truu Bluu
Ngl, that whole interview with Lois Lane was kinda cringe. You and by extension, your OC characters completely switch up every time they are in the presence of a attractive famous woman. I would suggest scrap it and to try again from the bottom up with more emphasis on Superman or maybe revealing a persona to the public. Or at least I would if the story wasn't already finished. Either way, the story is great so far. Almost as good as gone native
Ngl, that whole interview with Lois Lane was kinda cringe. You and by extension, your OC characters completely switch up every time they are in the presence of a attractive famous woman. I would suggest scrap it and to try again from the bottom up with more emphasis on Superman or maybe revealing a persona to the public. Or at least I would if the story wasn't already finished. Either way, the story is great so far. Almost as good as gone native
1/31 c41 Truu Bluu
I don't know why you are trying to give 2B such a big spotlight but whatever the reason, I feel like you're writing with too much of your voice. Realistically Virgil would have explained to 2B that Humanity isn't a "collective" like back in her world but individuals. One person will differ wildly compared to another. Trying to attribute traits to humanity like cruel or war-hungry makes no sense because part of humanity isn't brutal and war-hungry. This feels like less of a character's words and more of your own as the author.
I don't know why you are trying to give 2B such a big spotlight but whatever the reason, I feel like you're writing with too much of your voice. Realistically Virgil would have explained to 2B that Humanity isn't a "collective" like back in her world but individuals. One person will differ wildly compared to another. Trying to attribute traits to humanity like cruel or war-hungry makes no sense because part of humanity isn't brutal and war-hungry. This feels like less of a character's words and more of your own as the author.
1/28 c1 Truu Bluu
In the setting of DC, Gotham is based on New York and Metropolis is based on LA. They are the equivalent in the DC universe. Just FYI.
In the setting of DC, Gotham is based on New York and Metropolis is based on LA. They are the equivalent in the DC universe. Just FYI.
1/25 c88 
2CyrusWolfricFaust81194
I swear, whoever wrote the Darkest Knight definitely read this fic at least once.
2CyrusWolfricFaust81194I swear, whoever wrote the Darkest Knight definitely read this fic at least once.
12/16/2024 c90 Stanislaus
oh yeah i saw something about a sequel and i have a suggestion. what about a one shot sequel on what would have happened if Vergil turned to the right? how would life have been for him
oh yeah i saw something about a sequel and i have a suggestion. what about a one shot sequel on what would have happened if Vergil turned to the right? how would life have been for him
12/16/2024 c90 Stanislaus
This... has been a treasure of a story. It's one of the best fanfics I've read
This... has been a treasure of a story. It's one of the best fanfics I've read
11/9/2024 c90 vmage2
If you ever feel like a sequel, could you send Virgil and his New Gods to Tifa's Gaia? I wanna see him upend that world.
If you ever feel like a sequel, could you send Virgil and his New Gods to Tifa's Gaia? I wanna see him upend that world.
11/2/2024 c90 Hwang Manuel
Congratulations on finishing a fic! Its always great to see when authors write down about how they improved as they write a story. i think this is the last fic that i was interested in via its concept/content, sadly, but i will look forward to new updates, maybe even pucker up and read the ones i chose not to!
Congratulations on finishing a fic! Its always great to see when authors write down about how they improved as they write a story. i think this is the last fic that i was interested in via its concept/content, sadly, but i will look forward to new updates, maybe even pucker up and read the ones i chose not to!