8/12/2020 c5 Deal With Itt
I'm glad you didn't start at the beginning.

8/12/2020 c5 1sglenn3232
You should make go john wick

8/8/2020 c4 ThatOneGuyUpstairs
Can the cards work on living creatures? Or just anything organic, like, say he used a card on (for the sake of argument) Tifa, and then used another card on something like, DNA from someone with an active meta gene, or perhaps someone like Superman or Wonder Woman (setting aside how exactly he’d get his hands on stuff like that). Then fused them, would Tifa become a meta (or an Amazon or part Kryptonian) you get the idea. I ask because it could be kinda cool to see him, at the very least consider such things (not experimenting on Tifa I mean, just with the capabilities of the cards).

Or going in the opposite direction, could he say, put something in a card, and then try a sorta of reverse fusion with a blank card, basically trying to divide something in to component parts, or just remove one thing from another. To give a rough idea, say he comes across someone with a bullet lodged in them, could he place that person in the card, then trying pulling the bullet into a blank card.

Not trying to tell you to put anything in, just wondering if those are things that could theoretically happen. Because honestly the card system is kinda interesting to think about, and I’m hoping to see it explored more. My only major questions about it so far are, 1.) where did they come from, and 2.) why hasn’t the Penguin asked for them back if he knows they exist, or tried killing Vergil to get them back if it’s some kind of “imprints on the first person who uses them” type thing.

Final thoughts, like the story so far, was kinda weirded out by Tifa showing up at first, but so far it seems to have worked for the story. For one thing it seems like she’s going to have to be the muscle of the duo at least at the start, so she serves a purpose in the story. Secondly the fact that both characters have been ripped from their home universe gives them a level of kinship, which is a good basis for a relationship to grow from, whatever that relationship might become. Thirdly while she’s probably stronger then the average human on DC earth, its not so great a difference (or at the very least so great a difference) that one would question why Batman hasn’t looked into the matter yet. At the moment our primary characters are too low level to be noticed when other villains are around taking priority. Also I like how it seems to be a Villain story, or at least an Anti-Hero story, where the character knows what he is doing is wrong, and doesn’t try to justify it to themselves or other, like so many villain or anti-hero stories on this site or in fiction in general seem to do. They know what they are doing is wrong, they hate themselves or doing it, but they can’t see any other choice at the moment, and they aren’t trying to spin it so they are somehow in the right for doing what they are doing.

8/6/2020 c3 OGbacon
I am unfortunately not a fan of the powers your Mc has. I don’t know something just doesn’t feel right to me. Your other story going native is the one I like more. I just can’t get into this story maybe in a month or something I’ll try to read this again.

8/5/2020 c4 1Verdauga
A very good understanding of the truth of Gotham.

8/5/2020 c4 4viewing civilian
So fantastically Gotham. There’s something so goddamn cool about a person that doesn’t have powers or know how to use 50 martial arts trying to figure it out. You’re nailing it, can’t wait for next week

8/5/2020 c4 6Creature of Grimm
:)