for See No Evil (Complete)6/20/2024 c90 Guest
Recently stumbled across this and reread it. You grew a lot with this fic and have grown so much more to become one of my favorite authors, on and off the site.
I'd be interested in your take on some form of Warhammer 40K fic. The Emperor, for all his faults and failings, is an example of another character trying to do what Vergil did. Create a utopia, and ending up becoming a tyrant along the way. I'd be interested to see how you'd frame the interactions between The Emperor, a deformed tyrant born of the utilitarian best intentions, and a protagonist driven to be good, to do the right thing.
Recently stumbled across this and reread it. You grew a lot with this fic and have grown so much more to become one of my favorite authors, on and off the site.
I'd be interested in your take on some form of Warhammer 40K fic. The Emperor, for all his faults and failings, is an example of another character trying to do what Vergil did. Create a utopia, and ending up becoming a tyrant along the way. I'd be interested to see how you'd frame the interactions between The Emperor, a deformed tyrant born of the utilitarian best intentions, and a protagonist driven to be good, to do the right thing.
5/13/2024 c90 TeamT
I just read the whole story in three days and man this is good. I cant belive were this story started. The guy was literally a bum and now hes a god.
Keep up the good work man, cause its really good.
I agree with the criticism listed at the end, but man its so good.
I just read the whole story in three days and man this is good. I cant belive were this story started. The guy was literally a bum and now hes a god.
Keep up the good work man, cause its really good.
I agree with the criticism listed at the end, but man its so good.
5/12/2024 c21 
6Waki Paki
Rereading here. Just wanted to drop a review to counter the guest reviews below that call this story shite but doesn't offer a single single example or critique. I have to wonder if they were just trolling maliciously or are so ineloquent they can't figure out how to explain their arguments.
No story is perfect, but this is a very good one with a great slow burn of scaling threats and power, very human character interactions, and an ending that was basically exactly what you'd hope for from the tone of the story. It's definitely worth your time if you are a DC fan.
6Waki PakiRereading here. Just wanted to drop a review to counter the guest reviews below that call this story shite but doesn't offer a single single example or critique. I have to wonder if they were just trolling maliciously or are so ineloquent they can't figure out how to explain their arguments.
No story is perfect, but this is a very good one with a great slow burn of scaling threats and power, very human character interactions, and an ending that was basically exactly what you'd hope for from the tone of the story. It's definitely worth your time if you are a DC fan.
5/10/2024 c30 Hyperman15
Vergil would make a lot of money in the concrete business if he produced the correct type of sand to make concrete with his cards. Its getting harder to find thus more valuable for quality concrete. Pairs well with the construction company
Vergil would make a lot of money in the concrete business if he produced the correct type of sand to make concrete with his cards. Its getting harder to find thus more valuable for quality concrete. Pairs well with the construction company
3/26/2024 c3 Blazer1011
i come back to this amazing fic every now and again, it still makes me laugh how he made the guy give him a 5 star review
i come back to this amazing fic every now and again, it still makes me laugh how he made the guy give him a 5 star review
3/23/2024 c90 Apple424
Man this was just beautiful love vergil’s relationship with tifa. Man so good.
Man this was just beautiful love vergil’s relationship with tifa. Man so good.
1/4/2024 c9 Guest
Yeah, no. You actually had the utter gall to charge people money for this utter steaming shit? Any readers out there save your time and money, nothing about this utter crap is worth your limited time on this earth or actual money.
Yeah, no. You actually had the utter gall to charge people money for this utter steaming shit? Any readers out there save your time and money, nothing about this utter crap is worth your limited time on this earth or actual money.
1/4/2024 c4 Guest
Easily the most brain dead self insert i’ve ever read about, like this is easily a single digit iq insert, dumbest motherfucker alive that isn’t a vegetable.
Easily the most brain dead self insert i’ve ever read about, like this is easily a single digit iq insert, dumbest motherfucker alive that isn’t a vegetable.