for See No Evil (Complete)12/28/2023 c22 Blazer1011
so im rereading this amazing fic and just thought of something about murder weapon, is that him using his powers without the cards? like hes fusing the souls of those he killed into the bat? It's just a theory, a game-
so im rereading this amazing fic and just thought of something about murder weapon, is that him using his powers without the cards? like hes fusing the souls of those he killed into the bat? It's just a theory, a game-
12/19/2023 c90 
1asthane
Thank you so much for your work! I enjoyed it!
Thank you for some of the clarifications at the end. It did clear up a few things. However, I still have a few questions and plot holes I wanted to ask about.
What happened to the Court of Owls and Vanaver? I know some of them died/left Gotham during No Man's Land. But did the whole society fall apart? What happened to the Talons then?
What happened to the gangs he established? And his proxy society Checkmate? I really thought that was going to go somewhere because Virgil was making plans to create another and control both sides of the board. Though now, it seems pointless as he's a god and above secret societies. But I'm wondering if he's going to use it again as even Barbara was involved in trying to find them.
And speaking of that, would she ever discover that Concerned Citizen was Virgil all along?
And the biggest question I had was, why is no one addressing Vandal's claims of Virgil being his son? Even since that "reveal," I was expecting someone to give him shit. Probably Jason, Miranda, Bruce, Lex, or even Revy. I can't imagine the video not being released, or even edited. Virgil and Vandal were being dramatic because they knew they were being recorded. But did no one have any reactions to them being related?
Also, I'd imagine Artemis is pissed because Cheshire was a Shadow, and Virgil ordered everyone's death.
Sorry, the questions ended up being more than I thought. But despite all the holes though, I did really enjoy the story. It was very ambitious and a decent attempt considering the number of powers at play in the DC universe. Thank you for being the rare author that actually finishes their work. Looking forward to reading more you!
1asthaneThank you so much for your work! I enjoyed it!
Thank you for some of the clarifications at the end. It did clear up a few things. However, I still have a few questions and plot holes I wanted to ask about.
What happened to the Court of Owls and Vanaver? I know some of them died/left Gotham during No Man's Land. But did the whole society fall apart? What happened to the Talons then?
What happened to the gangs he established? And his proxy society Checkmate? I really thought that was going to go somewhere because Virgil was making plans to create another and control both sides of the board. Though now, it seems pointless as he's a god and above secret societies. But I'm wondering if he's going to use it again as even Barbara was involved in trying to find them.
And speaking of that, would she ever discover that Concerned Citizen was Virgil all along?
And the biggest question I had was, why is no one addressing Vandal's claims of Virgil being his son? Even since that "reveal," I was expecting someone to give him shit. Probably Jason, Miranda, Bruce, Lex, or even Revy. I can't imagine the video not being released, or even edited. Virgil and Vandal were being dramatic because they knew they were being recorded. But did no one have any reactions to them being related?
Also, I'd imagine Artemis is pissed because Cheshire was a Shadow, and Virgil ordered everyone's death.
Sorry, the questions ended up being more than I thought. But despite all the holes though, I did really enjoy the story. It was very ambitious and a decent attempt considering the number of powers at play in the DC universe. Thank you for being the rare author that actually finishes their work. Looking forward to reading more you!
12/1/2023 c82 13Anhkmorpork
"When an objection is sustained, the judge has determined that is a valid objection, meaning the question was improper under the rules of evidence. In that case, the witness can choose not to answer the question. When an objection is overruled, the judge has determined the objection is invalid."
The judge does not allow a line of questions from a sustained objection.
13Anhkmorpork"When an objection is sustained, the judge has determined that is a valid objection, meaning the question was improper under the rules of evidence. In that case, the witness can choose not to answer the question. When an objection is overruled, the judge has determined the objection is invalid."
The judge does not allow a line of questions from a sustained objection.
10/14/2023 c77 LennyFaceSupplier
bravo... bra-fucking-vo. genuis that not even I saw coming. holy shit. the ultimate, top tier solution. perfect. perfect fucking plan. wow. just wow.
bravo... bra-fucking-vo. genuis that not even I saw coming. holy shit. the ultimate, top tier solution. perfect. perfect fucking plan. wow. just wow.
10/11/2023 c64 LennyFaceSupplier
called it. i'm so fucking big brain. I had this shit in the bag. praise be past experiences! PRAISE BE!
called it. i'm so fucking big brain. I had this shit in the bag. praise be past experiences! PRAISE BE!
10/11/2023 c52 LennyFaceSupplier
oh... oh i really hope this whole gof of cocaine religion thing isnt just a one time schtick. i REALLY jope this is a serioud application. oh boy It would be amazing
oh... oh i really hope this whole gof of cocaine religion thing isnt just a one time schtick. i REALLY jope this is a serioud application. oh boy It would be amazing
10/9/2023 c21 LennyFaceSupplier
i love to imagine that superman is out there saving lives, and during it all, he is just listening to two people bicker back and forth about the pros and con of revealing batmans identity, while blatantly ignoring it all LOL.
i love to imagine that superman is out there saving lives, and during it all, he is just listening to two people bicker back and forth about the pros and con of revealing batmans identity, while blatantly ignoring it all LOL.
9/11/2023 c1 RadicalHuman02
I knew I wasn't going going to enjoy this as soon as Tifa Lockhart got introduced and I was right. I get what you're trying to accomplish here but every writer has their limits. You bit off more than you can chew on this one, her character literally doesn't fit.
I knew I wasn't going going to enjoy this as soon as Tifa Lockhart got introduced and I was right. I get what you're trying to accomplish here but every writer has their limits. You bit off more than you can chew on this one, her character literally doesn't fit.
8/14/2023 c22 lx
honestly getting too much hypocrisy for me like there is a supervillain on his neck and instead of thinking how to kill him as fast as possible this idiot of mc is thinking about an unknown girl, this is getting too much
honestly getting too much hypocrisy for me like there is a supervillain on his neck and instead of thinking how to kill him as fast as possible this idiot of mc is thinking about an unknown girl, this is getting too much
8/5/2023 c1 Zeroexe103
hey this story is good. this is my 5th time reading this. does anyone know of similar fanfics? if so please dm me.
hey this story is good. this is my 5th time reading this. does anyone know of similar fanfics? if so please dm me.
7/29/2023 c5 3maskedkeeper
Been reading your stories, pretty good stuff.
For this story I'll probably drop ,a good story but that warning in chapter one is probably why I can't finish it. I'm seeing the mc interact with a character but a small voice is reminding me that obviously this harem and more girls will appear with time. Obviously for those who like harems, this story seems great as the plot so far was good but I can't enjoy the development between them when I already know he is going to be getting them all.
3maskedkeeperBeen reading your stories, pretty good stuff.
For this story I'll probably drop ,a good story but that warning in chapter one is probably why I can't finish it. I'm seeing the mc interact with a character but a small voice is reminding me that obviously this harem and more girls will appear with time. Obviously for those who like harems, this story seems great as the plot so far was good but I can't enjoy the development between them when I already know he is going to be getting them all.