for Master of Shadows6/11/2021 c11 James Birdsong
Cool story!
Cool story!
4/17/2021 c10 Rose
The part with Max is also interestin. So he met Matilda. I wonder what would happen next to all. By the way when are Hilary and Julia's chapters are coming? Waiting for them. Bye.
The part with Max is also interestin. So he met Matilda. I wonder what would happen next to all. By the way when are Hilary and Julia's chapters are coming? Waiting for them. Bye.
4/17/2021 c10 Rose
I am so angry at Kai. How could he take a life like that? Poor Tyson. He had only his grandfather except Hiro. Now even his grandfather died. I think in this journey Tyson will discover about himself.
I am so angry at Kai. How could he take a life like that? Poor Tyson. He had only his grandfather except Hiro. Now even his grandfather died. I think in this journey Tyson will discover about himself.
3/8/2021 c9 Dranafile
Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! What a fine chp! Really Kai was not only NOT upto Tyson's expectations but also my expectations. I thought Kai would be more reasonable. And one Q. is Brotherhood where Brooklyn resides or used to reside. I suppose that according to Robert's story bout the 4 warriors, Tyson,Max,Ray and Kai will eventually team up to save the kingdom and also Kai would undergo a massive character development. Atleast I feel so. And is there Daichi in the story cuz Kenny and Hil are already there so if Daichi is also there then the whole G revolution would be in one team. And I suppose Mystel in already on the bad sideso Brooklyn would join him too and would also convince Crusher to do the same so only the whereabouts of Garland is still under wraps and is yet to be disclosed cuz Ming ming is already supporting Brooklyn. And I suppose then Raul and Julia will be mentioned for the first time in the next chp cuz I don't recall reading bout them in any of the chps. And bout the other imp. teams, White Tiger X, PPB All Starz, Majestics, Blitzkrieg Boys, members have already been introduced. I'm soo excited for the next chps. Please update soon. Bye~
Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! What a fine chp! Really Kai was not only NOT upto Tyson's expectations but also my expectations. I thought Kai would be more reasonable. And one Q. is Brotherhood where Brooklyn resides or used to reside. I suppose that according to Robert's story bout the 4 warriors, Tyson,Max,Ray and Kai will eventually team up to save the kingdom and also Kai would undergo a massive character development. Atleast I feel so. And is there Daichi in the story cuz Kenny and Hil are already there so if Daichi is also there then the whole G revolution would be in one team. And I suppose Mystel in already on the bad sideso Brooklyn would join him too and would also convince Crusher to do the same so only the whereabouts of Garland is still under wraps and is yet to be disclosed cuz Ming ming is already supporting Brooklyn. And I suppose then Raul and Julia will be mentioned for the first time in the next chp cuz I don't recall reading bout them in any of the chps. And bout the other imp. teams, White Tiger X, PPB All Starz, Majestics, Blitzkrieg Boys, members have already been introduced. I'm soo excited for the next chps. Please update soon. Bye~
3/2/2021 c9 Rose
Hi! So Tyson got to know that Kai isn't what he thinks. And the conversation between Robert and Mystel, Max and his teammates and Robert and Enrique had me taken to thinking land. What a beautiful chapter. Waiting for next chapters. Bye.
Hi! So Tyson got to know that Kai isn't what he thinks. And the conversation between Robert and Mystel, Max and his teammates and Robert and Enrique had me taken to thinking land. What a beautiful chapter. Waiting for next chapters. Bye.
2/14/2021 c1 
23BlackGeneralNocturna
Well, this was an interesting beginning. Very intriguing way to start it off, though I'll admit it was a struggle to read. Mostly because I don't know what characters look like so it was strange to imagine the scene, though obviously your target audience are fans of Beyblade anyhow
There was a rather startling moment at the start with you describing sacrifice-girl as a 'body', making me think for a moment she was already dead lol so it was a surprise that she started screaming. Struggled a bit with the tense of the story, but I'm assuming evil lady stabbed her in that scene not that she had already been stabbed.
Other than that little bit of reader incomprehension on my side, it's good :P
23BlackGeneralNocturnaWell, this was an interesting beginning. Very intriguing way to start it off, though I'll admit it was a struggle to read. Mostly because I don't know what characters look like so it was strange to imagine the scene, though obviously your target audience are fans of Beyblade anyhow
There was a rather startling moment at the start with you describing sacrifice-girl as a 'body', making me think for a moment she was already dead lol so it was a surprise that she started screaming. Struggled a bit with the tense of the story, but I'm assuming evil lady stabbed her in that scene not that she had already been stabbed.
Other than that little bit of reader incomprehension on my side, it's good :P
2/6/2021 c8 Dranafile
Oh! I didn't even realize the chp finished?! Now I'm even more excited to read the further chps. What does that serpent ring really mean? Does that mean Ray has already reclaimed the driger bow in the form of a ring? Cuz Tala said that the ring chooses his master. But that ring has a serpent and driger is a tiger. Well lets wait and see what happens! Hey I asked about Brooklyn in the last chp and you mention him in this chp! Hehe! Well I'm really looking forward to Kai and Tyson's meeting very much. Update soon. Bye~
Oh! I didn't even realize the chp finished?! Now I'm even more excited to read the further chps. What does that serpent ring really mean? Does that mean Ray has already reclaimed the driger bow in the form of a ring? Cuz Tala said that the ring chooses his master. But that ring has a serpent and driger is a tiger. Well lets wait and see what happens! Hey I asked about Brooklyn in the last chp and you mention him in this chp! Hehe! Well I'm really looking forward to Kai and Tyson's meeting very much. Update soon. Bye~
2/6/2021 c8 Rose
Oww you were not kidding when you said the story is dark. Indeed this chapter is dark. Wanting to know what happens next. Waiting for new uptade
Oww you were not kidding when you said the story is dark. Indeed this chapter is dark. Wanting to know what happens next. Waiting for new uptade
1/17/2021 c7 Rose
Hi! Your story is great. I am very keen to read about the next chapters. Hoping for more updates. I am most interedted in thr Ty/Hil/Kai triangle. Waiting for updates.(Sorry for reviewing this late)
Hi! Your story is great. I am very keen to read about the next chapters. Hoping for more updates. I am most interedted in thr Ty/Hil/Kai triangle. Waiting for updates.(Sorry for reviewing this late)
1/13/2021 c7 Dranafile
Yes I'm totallyyyy keeeeeen to reaad moooooooore! Oh and I'm more interested to read all the bladebrakers icluding Hil and if they do come together. You'd tell me that this fic will be a tyhil soo I want to know that when will they meet and will it be love at first sight for them cuz' as far the story is concerned Hil doesn't loves Kai. Soo I guessed it to be so. Do tell me about it. And when will all the bladebreakers come to Madari? I suppose they would all come to Madari. And will Hil ever get pregnant cuz' she's intentionally not becoming pregnant. Will she marry Tyson in future? And what about Brooklyn? Where is he? We only saw him (oops sorry read about him) in the prologue. Well I think I should end my questions now cuz' it will go on and on. Hehe. Well update soon. That would give me the answers. Bye~
Yes I'm totallyyyy keeeeeen to reaad moooooooore! Oh and I'm more interested to read all the bladebrakers icluding Hil and if they do come together. You'd tell me that this fic will be a tyhil soo I want to know that when will they meet and will it be love at first sight for them cuz' as far the story is concerned Hil doesn't loves Kai. Soo I guessed it to be so. Do tell me about it. And when will all the bladebreakers come to Madari? I suppose they would all come to Madari. And will Hil ever get pregnant cuz' she's intentionally not becoming pregnant. Will she marry Tyson in future? And what about Brooklyn? Where is he? We only saw him (oops sorry read about him) in the prologue. Well I think I should end my questions now cuz' it will go on and on. Hehe. Well update soon. That would give me the answers. Bye~
12/18/2020 c6 James Birdsong
Good story
Good story
12/16/2020 c1 Dranafile
Wow! I've waited since a long time for the update. Nothing more to comment today but still its a nice chp. Update soon. Bye~
Wow! I've waited since a long time for the update. Nothing more to comment today but still its a nice chp. Update soon. Bye~
12/4/2020 c5 73Moon and Blossoms
I am extremely sorry for the late review. I have become so late in reading fanfictions. And I absolutely feel sorry for you as you feel that you haven't got so many reviews. Don't worry, reviews will come. I have been in this state when I came to ffn lol.
I had seen the parts of Kai, Tyson and Max. Now its Ray's turn ;)
I know that you aren't a RayMariah fan, but you are writing a sweet romance for them! It was really cute! So it was Mystel who came in her dreams huh? Poor girl XD
I hope Ray gets the bow but I am wondering what plans are under your sleeves. I don't know but I feel that Mystel and Mariah would end up together :P
Lee and Ray going to the forest where the spirits or prisoners roam? Aah, it will be creepy then!
Update soon!
-Nain
P.S. Apologies once again for being late :
73Moon and BlossomsI am extremely sorry for the late review. I have become so late in reading fanfictions. And I absolutely feel sorry for you as you feel that you haven't got so many reviews. Don't worry, reviews will come. I have been in this state when I came to ffn lol.
I had seen the parts of Kai, Tyson and Max. Now its Ray's turn ;)
I know that you aren't a RayMariah fan, but you are writing a sweet romance for them! It was really cute! So it was Mystel who came in her dreams huh? Poor girl XD
I hope Ray gets the bow but I am wondering what plans are under your sleeves. I don't know but I feel that Mystel and Mariah would end up together :P
Lee and Ray going to the forest where the spirits or prisoners roam? Aah, it will be creepy then!
Update soon!
-Nain
P.S. Apologies once again for being late :
11/19/2020 c5 Dranafile
Nice story! Keep updating. Sorry I wasn't able to review on your previous chps,but I promise to review on each and every chp now on.I hope that you will make it a tyhil pairing as the story goes on. And again update soon.
Nice story! Keep updating. Sorry I wasn't able to review on your previous chps,but I promise to review on each and every chp now on.I hope that you will make it a tyhil pairing as the story goes on. And again update soon.