for Ordinary Creatures1/13/2023 c30 
4ReluctantWriter12
An update! Thanks for continuing. Interested to see how these two will work it out.
4ReluctantWriter12An update! Thanks for continuing. Interested to see how these two will work it out.
1/11/2023 c30 Twin68
Oh come on. Don’t you dare make Kim a whimp. She should of gotten in that girls face and told her to back off or step outside for an ass kicking. She is mated to a spirit warrior and you have to be strong or the wolf wouldn’t have pick Kim he would of picked the bitch Sophie. So start making Kim have more of a damn back bone. And she has waited for this opportunity with Jarred for a long time and it has finally come and all of a sudden she starts doubting all her feelings and decisions with Jarred. Like seriously. Till next time my friend and please update sooner.
Oh come on. Don’t you dare make Kim a whimp. She should of gotten in that girls face and told her to back off or step outside for an ass kicking. She is mated to a spirit warrior and you have to be strong or the wolf wouldn’t have pick Kim he would of picked the bitch Sophie. So start making Kim have more of a damn back bone. And she has waited for this opportunity with Jarred for a long time and it has finally come and all of a sudden she starts doubting all her feelings and decisions with Jarred. Like seriously. Till next time my friend and please update sooner.
12/19/2022 c29 Sparkle15
Darn Sophie! Definitely didn’t miss her. Ugh she and her friends ruined the moment. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Darn Sophie! Definitely didn’t miss her. Ugh she and her friends ruined the moment. Looking forward to the next chapter!
6/22/2022 c28 Sparkle15
Thank you for continuing to update this story! I’ve just about read almost every story shipping Jared/Kim and am happy there’s at least one ongoing. Take care!
Thank you for continuing to update this story! I’ve just about read almost every story shipping Jared/Kim and am happy there’s at least one ongoing. Take care!
6/20/2022 c28 Mori
Hell yeah, Kim! Standing up to Sophie— like an adult, she was so elegant. Loved it! Can’t wait for their date :)
Hell yeah, Kim! Standing up to Sophie— like an adult, she was so elegant. Loved it! Can’t wait for their date :)
5/9/2022 c27 Mori
awwww babies on their first date! And smoooooth, Paul— he’s such a good wingman bahaha! Excellent :))
awwww babies on their first date! And smoooooth, Paul— he’s such a good wingman bahaha! Excellent :))
4/28/2022 c26 sassykitten
Jared! That would’ve been the perfect time to tell her! Thanks for the fast update :)
Jared! That would’ve been the perfect time to tell her! Thanks for the fast update :)
4/28/2022 c26 Mori
Happy Thursday to me! A Ellieroth update! As always, the dialogue is superb. And ahhh we almost had a moment and I’m so glad there was avoidance— ripens the opportunity for a blunder and the ~angst~ of coming together after such a miscommunication. YAYYYY GIMME THAT SWEET ASS ANGST! Love it, love your writing, love your story. Thank you!
Happy Thursday to me! A Ellieroth update! As always, the dialogue is superb. And ahhh we almost had a moment and I’m so glad there was avoidance— ripens the opportunity for a blunder and the ~angst~ of coming together after such a miscommunication. YAYYYY GIMME THAT SWEET ASS ANGST! Love it, love your writing, love your story. Thank you!
4/27/2022 c25 Alizeh2000
I love this story and your beautiful writing. I'm so excited for the next chapter
I love this story and your beautiful writing. I'm so excited for the next chapter
4/25/2022 c25 Sparkle15
Aww! Absolutely love this! I like how they’re all friends and I completely ship Jared & Kim. Can’t wait to read more.
Aww! Absolutely love this! I like how they’re all friends and I completely ship Jared & Kim. Can’t wait to read more.
4/22/2022 c25 sassykitten
Yay you’re back! I love Kim and Paul’s relationship!
Yay you’re back! I love Kim and Paul’s relationship!