4/21/2022 c25 Mori
To see you comment back to me is like having a celebrity shoutout. I’ve got stars in my eyes! And actually I have yet to catch a single grammatical mistake in any of the chapters so that’s why I almost thought I was manufacturing a memory about your language note! You simply floor me. You have more natural flow and fluent ease than 95% of the native English writers I read.

This was awesome, especially Jared’s apology and their moment of bonding. As always, Paul is such a firecracker and a lot of fun to read. You have done such a terrific job of creating this easy, realistic friendship between them…so distinct and with dialogue so natural.

Thanks for the quick update! Can’t wait for the next installment…have an amazing week and know all your fans will be eagerly waiting for the next update! Stay healthy! :)

4/13/2022 c24 Mori
Babe you’re back! I’m sorry the last couple months have been shitty. You deserve only fabulous months :( here’s hoping the rest of your spring is nothing short of wonderful! As always you deliver this story with such a tone of conversation and reality— exceptional pacing, great characterization, cinematic dialogue. You’re so talented. Did you say once that you’re not a native English speaker or am I misremembering? i’d NEVER believe it otherwise …you are exceptionally gifted at writing.

I get a thrill every time you update!

4/13/2022 c1 4ReluctantWriter12
Great chapter! Thanks for updating!

2/15/2022 c23 Mori
AAAAAEEEEEIIIII I’m so stoked. You did it in such a fresh way. So creatively executed and so naturally done. What a marvelous set of relationships you’ve woven here. I love it.

2/15/2022 c23 Twin68
About damn time! Now Kim, she better not start freaking out on them. I want Kim to be a bad ass. I’m so tired of people or writers who make her out as a weak and meek person. She’s not. She’s just shy. Which is totally different. So please in your story don’t make her out to be that way. Shy yes, but a bad ass in her on way. And thank you for the quick update. And for not making us wait so long like some writers do. We readers hate that. Till next time friend

2/10/2022 c22 Mori
Looooove Paul and Jared’s dynamic. Their banter is fabulous. I love Kim’s wariness as well, and how it’s edged with this cheeky humor as you write. I love this so much, but you already know this

2/10/2022 c22 4ReluctantWriter12
Yay for the update! I am also excited to see the Paul and Kim dynamic again, but I have a feeling she is going to be pretty pissed at him. You should do another story where the Paul from this story imprints on Rachel and this Kim and Jared laugh at him about it and are along for the ride

2/10/2022 c22 3fervently
Paul to the rescue! I miss Kim and Paul’s dynamic so much and am so excited to see them interact again! i can’t wait to see what Paul and Jared come up with as their “brilliant” solution and what Kim ends up thinking.