for Ordinary Creatures12/2/2021 c18 Guest
Ooh I hope Kim makes Jared work for it haha
Ooh I hope Kim makes Jared work for it haha
11/25/2021 c17 Guest
as I know you update the story a month after publishing it. I've been looking for three days if you have uploaded the new chapter! Im so exited to see what happen!
as I know you update the story a month after publishing it. I've been looking for three days if you have uploaded the new chapter! Im so exited to see what happen!
10/27/2021 c17 Alejandra daughter of Apollo
excuse me while i go scream !
this is the moment i’ve been waiting for my entire life, i can’t wait to see jared become the biggest simp in existence️️️️️
kim is the girlboss to jared’s male-wife
excuse me while i go scream !
this is the moment i’ve been waiting for my entire life, i can’t wait to see jared become the biggest simp in existence️️️️️
kim is the girlboss to jared’s male-wife
10/26/2021 c17 
3fervently
Yay! The imprint happened! I can’t wait to see our lovely Kim’s reaction to it, especially after both Paul and Jared have been ignoring her for a while now. Can’t wait for the next update!
3ferventlyYay! The imprint happened! I can’t wait to see our lovely Kim’s reaction to it, especially after both Paul and Jared have been ignoring her for a while now. Can’t wait for the next update!
10/25/2021 c17 Guest
Boo hoo, I was rooting for Paul. Still a good story
Boo hoo, I was rooting for Paul. Still a good story
10/25/2021 c17 Mori
YAYYYYY ITS HAPPENED! I am so thrilled, I can’t even speak. What a lovely chapter. Loved his over-attuned senses going haywire due to their awareness of Kim. I just can’t even wait. How will all this pan out? I’m so excited for more.
YAYYYYY ITS HAPPENED! I am so thrilled, I can’t even speak. What a lovely chapter. Loved his over-attuned senses going haywire due to their awareness of Kim. I just can’t even wait. How will all this pan out? I’m so excited for more.
10/25/2021 c17 Guest
I agree with the other reviews. Each chapter is so good. Can’t wait to see what her reaction will be and how Paul will feel about everything. Please don’t make up wait too long for the update!
I agree with the other reviews. Each chapter is so good. Can’t wait to see what her reaction will be and how Paul will feel about everything. Please don’t make up wait too long for the update!
10/19/2021 c16 4ReluctantWriter12
Oh my god this is SO GOOD! and hysterical. The ken doll and marie condo thing had me laughing at my computer screen. Paul and Kim have so much chemistry here. I want them to imprint so bad, but I remember reading an author note somewhere (I think) that this is not your intention. I can't wait for the imprint. Thanks for updating! Can't wait for the next one!
4ReluctantWriter12Oh my god this is SO GOOD! and hysterical. The ken doll and marie condo thing had me laughing at my computer screen. Paul and Kim have so much chemistry here. I want them to imprint so bad, but I remember reading an author note somewhere (I think) that this is not your intention. I can't wait for the imprint. Thanks for updating! Can't wait for the next one!
10/16/2021 c16 Mori
Awwww my poor baby Kim. :( I love your Kim so much. And I love your Paul. And your Jared And I’m so thirsty for the imprint scene that babyyyy I hope it takes like twenty pages because you make it hurt so good. I’m burning to read your imprint! And can’t wait to see what paul makes of it all. And if Jared had sudden insecurities after all the teasing he’s done to Paul about her, and goading for him to imprint on her. I just am too excited.
As always, for painting such a beautiful suit with great characterization and well crafted world— thank you!
Awwww my poor baby Kim. :( I love your Kim so much. And I love your Paul. And your Jared And I’m so thirsty for the imprint scene that babyyyy I hope it takes like twenty pages because you make it hurt so good. I’m burning to read your imprint! And can’t wait to see what paul makes of it all. And if Jared had sudden insecurities after all the teasing he’s done to Paul about her, and goading for him to imprint on her. I just am too excited.
As always, for painting such a beautiful suit with great characterization and well crafted world— thank you!
10/14/2021 c16 3fervently
I was so excited to see that you updated! Poor Kim having to deal with Paul shutting her out due to her not being “pack”. Patiently waiting for Jared to imprint on her so our two favorite friends can be friends again!
I’m loving the way you’re writing out this trio and can’t wait for the next update!
3ferventlyI was so excited to see that you updated! Poor Kim having to deal with Paul shutting her out due to her not being “pack”. Patiently waiting for Jared to imprint on her so our two favorite friends can be friends again!
I’m loving the way you’re writing out this trio and can’t wait for the next update!
10/13/2021 c15 4ReluctantWriter12
Great story! Hope there is an update soon. So curious about how the imprint goes.
4ReluctantWriter12Great story! Hope there is an update soon. So curious about how the imprint goes.
9/27/2021 c15 guest
Just found this story and it is SO good! Read the whole thing at once. I LOVE your Jared/Paul/Kim. The relationship between Paul and Kim is awesome and can't wait for the imprinting and relationship development of Jared and Kim. I love that he already is into her and got to know her as a person. Please update soon!
Just found this story and it is SO good! Read the whole thing at once. I LOVE your Jared/Paul/Kim. The relationship between Paul and Kim is awesome and can't wait for the imprinting and relationship development of Jared and Kim. I love that he already is into her and got to know her as a person. Please update soon!
9/23/2021 c7 Guest
Miss this story. I was really enjoying your writing. Are there going to be more chapters soon. I hope.
Miss this story. I was really enjoying your writing. Are there going to be more chapters soon. I hope.