for Ordinary Creatures2/24/2021 c11 Mori
SO GOOD AHHH your pacing is just outstanding and you have a gift for strong characterization through dialogue. I just love this story and love the tease of Jared’s interest in Kim.
SO GOOD AHHH your pacing is just outstanding and you have a gift for strong characterization through dialogue. I just love this story and love the tease of Jared’s interest in Kim.
2/20/2021 c10 AJ
Yay so glad u uploaded! Love how Kim's personality is starting to come through when she's teasing Paul - can't wait for the next chapter!
Yay so glad u uploaded! Love how Kim's personality is starting to come through when she's teasing Paul - can't wait for the next chapter!
2/19/2021 c10 anon
This story by far has been so entertaining. Both the dialogue and monologues provide both great character depth and originality. I really enjoy the dynamics of all the characters so far. Great work!
This story by far has been so entertaining. Both the dialogue and monologues provide both great character depth and originality. I really enjoy the dynamics of all the characters so far. Great work!
2/18/2021 c10 
2toffiechick281
Yay your back! I've reread this about 100 times waiting for the update, there is a sad lack of kim/Paul bff stories and this one really takes the cake so please please keep going
2toffiechick281Yay your back! I've reread this about 100 times waiting for the update, there is a sad lack of kim/Paul bff stories and this one really takes the cake so please please keep going
2/18/2021 c10 Mori
I can’t wait for Jared to be pushed head first onto the train tracks of Angst for his witless teasing about Kim and Paul as a couple and his general cavalier attitude toward Kim. Ooooohoooo I cannot wait!
I can’t wait for Jared to be pushed head first onto the train tracks of Angst for his witless teasing about Kim and Paul as a couple and his general cavalier attitude toward Kim. Ooooohoooo I cannot wait!
12/11/2020 c9 Dina
Jared is really have to slap himself upside the head for playing matchmaker for his imprint. I’m really loving your story. The characters are very unique and realistic
Jared is really have to slap himself upside the head for playing matchmaker for his imprint. I’m really loving your story. The characters are very unique and realistic
12/11/2020 c8 Dina
I really like the dynamic you built for Jared/Kim an Kim/Paul. Kim and Paul are giving me such siblings vibes and it’s so cute because they’re literally pack family
I really like the dynamic you built for Jared/Kim an Kim/Paul. Kim and Paul are giving me such siblings vibes and it’s so cute because they’re literally pack family
12/11/2020 c7 Dina
Omg jared is so close to phasing!
Omg jared is so close to phasing!
12/11/2020 c6 Dina
I love Kim’s grandma! She knows! I wonder what her reaction is gonna be about the imprinting
I love Kim’s grandma! She knows! I wonder what her reaction is gonna be about the imprinting
12/11/2020 c4 Dina
I’m really loving this story! I’m so glad Sam showed up when he did
I’m really loving this story! I’m so glad Sam showed up when he did
11/29/2020 c9 Guest
I love this story! It's a really refreshing take on the Kim/Jared situation, one I haven't seen before. I love how you're gradually building to Jared, and eventually Paul's shift, with hints that fit naturally into the story. It's very well crafted and all the characters feel very human and real. Kim's crush on Jared is so cute here, which is nice because it can be easy for it to come across as creepy. I like that you're exploring the very early days of the pack and establishing a friendship between Kim and Paul. It all feels very natural and I'm hooked. I really hope you see it through, I can't wait for the next chapter!
I love this story! It's a really refreshing take on the Kim/Jared situation, one I haven't seen before. I love how you're gradually building to Jared, and eventually Paul's shift, with hints that fit naturally into the story. It's very well crafted and all the characters feel very human and real. Kim's crush on Jared is so cute here, which is nice because it can be easy for it to come across as creepy. I like that you're exploring the very early days of the pack and establishing a friendship between Kim and Paul. It all feels very natural and I'm hooked. I really hope you see it through, I can't wait for the next chapter!
11/28/2020 c9 AJ
omg i love this, paul and kim is the friendship we didnt know we wanted but desperately needed. also paul and jared trying match make is like my last 2 brain cells trying to come up with a good idea. side note: kim mentioning she does weaving to carry on the culture is so cute
omg i love this, paul and kim is the friendship we didnt know we wanted but desperately needed. also paul and jared trying match make is like my last 2 brain cells trying to come up with a good idea. side note: kim mentioning she does weaving to carry on the culture is so cute
11/27/2020 c9 Guest
Great chapter! So keen for more!
Great chapter! So keen for more!