for Ordinary Creatures11/18/2020 c1 Guest
Great first chapter! Your writing is brilliant!
Great first chapter! Your writing is brilliant!
11/13/2020 c8 Mori
Once again, your style of dialogue is just the gift that keeps on giving. I love your Kim, your Jared and your Paul. And I can’t wait for the imprinting!
Once again, your style of dialogue is just the gift that keeps on giving. I love your Kim, your Jared and your Paul. And I can’t wait for the imprinting!
11/13/2020 c7 Mori
AHHHHHH GOD I LOVE THIS SCENE. This is such a perfect setup for inevitable angst. :) I love love love this. Omg!
AHHHHHH GOD I LOVE THIS SCENE. This is such a perfect setup for inevitable angst. :) I love love love this. Omg!
11/6/2020 c7 Twin68
I loved the way Kim took up for Paul and Paul for Kim. Everyone gives Paul shit for being an ass but he really was making Kim be brave and have some what of a bake one. To leave the truck and just talk to jarred and he was a complete ass by the way and so was his girl friend. How could jarred not see that for himself. Is he just plain stupid. He has common since. Anyway I loved the way Kim and Paul watched out for each other and the way they inter act with each other. It’s like they are slowly becoming friends and knowing each other. And having each other’s back. Even if they don’t show it to each other. Hurry up with the updates you take to long. Til next time friend
I loved the way Kim took up for Paul and Paul for Kim. Everyone gives Paul shit for being an ass but he really was making Kim be brave and have some what of a bake one. To leave the truck and just talk to jarred and he was a complete ass by the way and so was his girl friend. How could jarred not see that for himself. Is he just plain stupid. He has common since. Anyway I loved the way Kim and Paul watched out for each other and the way they inter act with each other. It’s like they are slowly becoming friends and knowing each other. And having each other’s back. Even if they don’t show it to each other. Hurry up with the updates you take to long. Til next time friend
69/29/2020 c4 Twin68
Oh my gosh that was awesome! But is Paul going to imprint on Kim instead of Jared?
Oh my gosh that was awesome! But is Paul going to imprint on Kim instead of Jared?
9/27/2020 c4 Mori
Great pacing. I love it.
Great pacing. I love it.
8/17/2020 c3 Sukiii
Hey really enjoying this and I wonder where this is goinn especially considering the werwolf situation! Hope to see more soon!
Hey really enjoying this and I wonder where this is goinn especially considering the werwolf situation! Hope to see more soon!
8/12/2020 c3 Mori
You have such a gift for dialogue! I’m surprise your native tongue isn’t English because you’re very adept with casual dialogue and imbuing personality into different voices. You’re really talented.
You have such a gift for dialogue! I’m surprise your native tongue isn’t English because you’re very adept with casual dialogue and imbuing personality into different voices. You’re really talented.
8/3/2020 c2 Mori
This is awesome. The dialogue between them is so natural and snappy and fun. The tone you give Kim throughout her narration is really approachable and realistic, too. Your characters are great and I can’t wait for imprinting fun!
This is awesome. The dialogue between them is so natural and snappy and fun. The tone you give Kim throughout her narration is really approachable and realistic, too. Your characters are great and I can’t wait for imprinting fun!
7/24/2020 c1 Mori
I love the conversational and wry tone of the narration. You do a good job imbuing humor into Kim’s voice and it makes it refreshing and human. Love the premise and looking forward to more!
I love the conversational and wry tone of the narration. You do a good job imbuing humor into Kim’s voice and it makes it refreshing and human. Love the premise and looking forward to more!