for The Chosen Six5/14 c1 Natalie4q6
Checked out a site called Storio (storioai dot com), and I’m impressed. You can add character images, background art, and choices to your chapters. Felt like a nice tool for anyone doing interactive fiction.
Checked out a site called Storio (storioai dot com), and I’m impressed. You can add character images, background art, and choices to your chapters. Felt like a nice tool for anyone doing interactive fiction.
5/8 c62 
4Digital Dragon Productions
Great chapter. Villains struck the right cord. I wanted to see a scene where students would tell Umbridge to shove it, but alas its left to the imagination
4Digital Dragon ProductionsGreat chapter. Villains struck the right cord. I wanted to see a scene where students would tell Umbridge to shove it, but alas its left to the imagination
4/26 c60 N. A. Wennerholm
This is where a large chunk of Slytherin along with other Members of the Other Houses who Have supremest tendencies get charged with Treason Which includes all Death Eaters and Members of the Ministry. I say you should have speeded up the arrest and execution of all of those bigoted discriminatory Pure Blood and hypocritical Half-Bloods. Because leaving them alive is too dangerous. As someone who has come from a family where too many of my family relatives have been murdered and executed for doing the right thing. While at the same time, we also have many bad apples, black sheep in the Family whose crimes and sins are so great the only acceptable penalty is death. And let me tell you I wouldn't stop it in fact I would not even be afraid to put them to death to send them To Yeshua and his father for final Judgement.
This is where a large chunk of Slytherin along with other Members of the Other Houses who Have supremest tendencies get charged with Treason Which includes all Death Eaters and Members of the Ministry. I say you should have speeded up the arrest and execution of all of those bigoted discriminatory Pure Blood and hypocritical Half-Bloods. Because leaving them alive is too dangerous. As someone who has come from a family where too many of my family relatives have been murdered and executed for doing the right thing. While at the same time, we also have many bad apples, black sheep in the Family whose crimes and sins are so great the only acceptable penalty is death. And let me tell you I wouldn't stop it in fact I would not even be afraid to put them to death to send them To Yeshua and his father for final Judgement.
4/26 c56 N. A. Wennerholm
Would love to see the Toad hanging in the rafters by her neck with shackles around her wrists and ankles. She is a power-hungry Bitch with no proper morals and hates kids. Heck knowing Elizabeth she would have probably wanted to shoot the Toad full of bullet holes. To make sure she is dead and can no longer hurt anyone, especially children.
Would love to see the Toad hanging in the rafters by her neck with shackles around her wrists and ankles. She is a power-hungry Bitch with no proper morals and hates kids. Heck knowing Elizabeth she would have probably wanted to shoot the Toad full of bullet holes. To make sure she is dead and can no longer hurt anyone, especially children.
4/26 c55 N. A. Wennerholm
Every Time I read the Name Deloris it disgusts me that such a woman shares my stepsister's name And any other woman I have met with the name they are nothing like that toad who makes everyone else look bad. Since they are nothing like her.
Every Time I read the Name Deloris it disgusts me that such a woman shares my stepsister's name And any other woman I have met with the name they are nothing like that toad who makes everyone else look bad. Since they are nothing like her.
4/26 c54 N. A. Wennerholm
Molly is very foolish when it comes to the twins. I wouldn't want any of my kids to be with that corrupt ministry. If I had been able to have my own. But found out in 2009 That I wouldn't be able to have my own safety. I was High risk and had been for a long time with what they discovered when taking a look inside with the CAT scan and later with the exploratory where a camera was used by going down my throat and later up the other end. Plus it was also around the time I was to start my period.
Chapter 54
Vernon needs to lose everything and have it turned over to Petunia and Dudley. Which includes the House. And hopefully Sirius and Petunia's Cousin help to get the House.
As for The Daily Prophet Needs to be shut down since they never seem to learn. And Fudge needs to be removed from the Office via the queen's Orders. And replaced and The Ministry needs to be reminded That they Answer to the Prime Minister and thus the Queen.
Molly is very foolish when it comes to the twins. I wouldn't want any of my kids to be with that corrupt ministry. If I had been able to have my own. But found out in 2009 That I wouldn't be able to have my own safety. I was High risk and had been for a long time with what they discovered when taking a look inside with the CAT scan and later with the exploratory where a camera was used by going down my throat and later up the other end. Plus it was also around the time I was to start my period.
Chapter 54
Vernon needs to lose everything and have it turned over to Petunia and Dudley. Which includes the House. And hopefully Sirius and Petunia's Cousin help to get the House.
As for The Daily Prophet Needs to be shut down since they never seem to learn. And Fudge needs to be removed from the Office via the queen's Orders. And replaced and The Ministry needs to be reminded That they Answer to the Prime Minister and thus the Queen.
4/26 c1 ChloeBenjamin
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4/24 c21 N. A. Wennerholm
If I had Been there every time Lockhart was around I would warn him to back off or duffer a very painful whipping and spanking. And to stop thinking about everything one wanted what he wants. Fame and celebrity and hero Worship which is a big fat no-no. They are a form of Idol Worship which is forbidden. If people bothered to read and learn their Bibles and the laws written within. That come from on high aka Heaven.
If I had Been there every time Lockhart was around I would warn him to back off or duffer a very painful whipping and spanking. And to stop thinking about everything one wanted what he wants. Fame and celebrity and hero Worship which is a big fat no-no. They are a form of Idol Worship which is forbidden. If people bothered to read and learn their Bibles and the laws written within. That come from on high aka Heaven.
4/24 c20 N. A. Wennerholm
If I was there in the Ministry and Saw that statue I would say out loud disgusting the statue must go. Once I tell my Cousin The Queen what is going on what is going on demand that the Statue must go and Elizabeth demandingthe Ministry being cleaned out of corruption And all of the The Ministry Laws reviewed of violations with not mating up with the Common Laws and Crown Laws and Parliamentary Laws. And laws of discrimination and inequality were removed.
If I was there in the Ministry and Saw that statue I would say out loud disgusting the statue must go. Once I tell my Cousin The Queen what is going on what is going on demand that the Statue must go and Elizabeth demandingthe Ministry being cleaned out of corruption And all of the The Ministry Laws reviewed of violations with not mating up with the Common Laws and Crown Laws and Parliamentary Laws. And laws of discrimination and inequality were removed.
4/6 c1 hornjames244
this is a massive fix it fanfiction that take the magical and make it mundane it is a great read though but is still a fix it fanfiction
this is a massive fix it fanfiction that take the magical and make it mundane it is a great read though but is still a fix it fanfiction
3/10 c1 jack.connor
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2/27 c48 Robotdocter
yeah im not comfortable at all having ready what Pettigrew did to Ginny, no matter how much of an absolute heinous person he is.
same with what they did to get back at Draco and Pansy, as much as they deserved *something* even i wouldnt say they deserved to be blackmailed like that, especially at their age _ arent they still quite young? i doubt there was literally nothing else that could have been done, they could have asked the house elves for help spying on the two for one.
love this story ofc but that just kinda rubbed me the wrong way
yeah im not comfortable at all having ready what Pettigrew did to Ginny, no matter how much of an absolute heinous person he is.
same with what they did to get back at Draco and Pansy, as much as they deserved *something* even i wouldnt say they deserved to be blackmailed like that, especially at their age _ arent they still quite young? i doubt there was literally nothing else that could have been done, they could have asked the house elves for help spying on the two for one.
love this story ofc but that just kinda rubbed me the wrong way
2/27 c45 Robotdocter
i know this is super late and the story's already done but gosh it makes me sad reading that bit with Eloise, knowing the pairing, even if she may have been more interested in Harry's title than his actual self ; - ;
i know this is super late and the story's already done but gosh it makes me sad reading that bit with Eloise, knowing the pairing, even if she may have been more interested in Harry's title than his actual self ; - ;