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7/26/2020 c1 Omni-Celestial
I didn't spot much grammatical had a proper flow of ,some cliches like Alaya taking a human form with human emotions was a bit annoying and could be aggravating for some other people too.
But it is good for your first attempt at publishing a story.
You will obviously improve with time.
It was at least enjoyable to read, for me,somewhat.
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