for Breathe4/19/2021 c1 Kaizer1008
Kudos to the writer of this book. You did an amazing job. Why don't you try to publish your book in NovelStar? A lot of readers will love your work, judging from the book I just read.
Kudos to the writer of this book. You did an amazing job. Why don't you try to publish your book in NovelStar? A lot of readers will love your work, judging from the book I just read.
7/28/2020 c1 
27cacticouch
! THIS WAS FANTASTIC !
when i set this challenge this was EXACTLY what i was thinking of; the last few lines are excellent. i really felt nightwish's fear at the end, and her panic was really well written. amazing job, and accepted.
27cacticouch! THIS WAS FANTASTIC !
when i set this challenge this was EXACTLY what i was thinking of; the last few lines are excellent. i really felt nightwish's fear at the end, and her panic was really well written. amazing job, and accepted.