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8/3/2020 c7 59Pen to Paper Writer
Well done!
8/3/2020 c7 SnowKing1701
Please repost this chapter to fix the style. Too difficult to read. Thanks.
8/1/2020 c5 Guest
Bench warrant for just a parking ticket? Wow, the US can really be backwards on occasion. In my country they simply send it to the revenue service, where it's added to one's tax obligations, with a good surcharge as well.
Also, the SAW variant of the FAL is the FALO, for Fusil Automatique Lourd, or Heavy automatic Rifle - L2A1 to the Aussies and C2A1 to the Canucks. Missed the FAL/FALO combo during my military service, as they had been replaced in the units that still had them by the more widely issued G3A3-4/HK11A1 combo before I got called up.
8/3/2020 c1 jag389
Just finished this one setting.I enjoyed all 6 chapters. chapter 7 did not down load right.
8/3/2020 c7 castle1701
I liked this story. I was wondering how you would get them out of this pickle

BTW, the formatting is messed up. Showing HTML
8/3/2020 c7 80Garrae
Nice. Fun.
But the formatting has gone sideways in the upload - one of FF's little quirks, so you might want to re-upload.
8/2/2020 c6 Jbug47
I hope Rick confesses how he really feels about Kate! It would be so romantic! This is a great, fun story! Looking forward to more!
8/2/2020 c6 gbad
I really like the plot and the characters that were introduced.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
8/2/2020 c6 59Pen to Paper Writer
Maybe a good game of Trivial Pursuit could be the ticket? But I hope that Kate doesn't get into too much trouble when those bad guys come to the cave. Because you know they will! :) Good chapter.
8/2/2020 c6 Hamlet 77
You don’t need stinky Stilton cheese for decent venison burgers... and certainly no garlic butter... yuck.

Beckett to the rescue! Hooray
8/1/2020 c6 19wendykw
I like the sheriff. I hope Mrs. Cervantes wasn't followed by the FBI. Having Rick give Kate the backstory is a great way to give us this history. Love the back and forth when Rick goes off topic.
8/1/2020 c5 4coyotepup4
First, Rick needs to hire Harvey Specter as his attorney because the idiots he has are useless.

Second, considering Rick's face is all over the news the way it is and the FBI being well them, wouldn't Big Daddy Castle learn that his boy is in trouble and show up?
7/30/2020 c3 Sharon
Very interesting! I can't wait to see how Castle gets out of this one.
8/1/2020 c5 19wendykw
Love the Sheriff and Mother characters.
8/1/2020 c5 bjkarmie
Great story! I can't wait to see what really is going on if they aren't FBI agents. Obviously Kate cares for Rick more than she realizes or will admit. Don't keep me in suspense too long! Thank you for another well written adventure.
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