for Going Down to Mexico7/30/2020 c3 Hamlet 77
Oh dear, this can’t be good!
I suspect Rick is going to need the assistance of a certain NYPD Detective. And I don’t mean Tom Demming...
I HATE Demming.
Oh dear, this can’t be good!
I suspect Rick is going to need the assistance of a certain NYPD Detective. And I don’t mean Tom Demming...
I HATE Demming.
7/29/2020 c2 coyotepup4
So is Gray nuts or was Rick called Derek Storm Once Upon a Time in the West or the East.
So is Gray nuts or was Rick called Derek Storm Once Upon a Time in the West or the East.
7/29/2020 c2 
19wendykw
I like the live and let live attitude. Hope that continues, but I figure they'll find someone who doesn't feel that way eventually,
19wendykwI like the live and let live attitude. Hope that continues, but I figure they'll find someone who doesn't feel that way eventually,
7/29/2020 c2 59Pen to Paper Writer
A bunch of cats named Castle? I shudder at the thought of her having that many. How would she know which is which? Good chapter, keep 'em coming.
59Pen to Paper WriterA bunch of cats named Castle? I shudder at the thought of her having that many. How would she know which is which? Good chapter, keep 'em coming.
7/28/2020 c1 23Swordwriter
So Rick's headed out to the Barranca. interesting. Perhaps a hot little senorita or two?
Swordwriter
23SwordwriterSo Rick's headed out to the Barranca. interesting. Perhaps a hot little senorita or two?
Swordwriter
7/28/2020 c1 4coyotepup4
I like it.
So is Rick and Six friends going to Mexico to help protect a small village from outlaws? That would be so awesome. He does have Steve McQueen's eyes.
4coyotepup4I like it.
So is Rick and Six friends going to Mexico to help protect a small village from outlaws? That would be so awesome. He does have Steve McQueen's eyes.
7/28/2020 c1 19wendykw
Read the chapters of AaDA. Gave me reassurances that Rick doesn't get his friends killed in this story. The beginning of this makes me dislike Gina and Paula even more than I did before. So how much trouble are you going to get him into?
19wendykwRead the chapters of AaDA. Gave me reassurances that Rick doesn't get his friends killed in this story. The beginning of this makes me dislike Gina and Paula even more than I did before. So how much trouble are you going to get him into?
7/28/2020 c1 59Pen to Paper Writer
Interesting start! But I think that the work I'll need to do to look up words in this story is going to be the death of me. But I'll get a free Englist Lit course out of it before I go. Great first chapter. :)
59Pen to Paper WriterInteresting start! But I think that the work I'll need to do to look up words in this story is going to be the death of me. But I'll get a free Englist Lit course out of it before I go. Great first chapter. :)
7/28/2020 c1 Hamlet 77
This ‘friend’ of Castle sounds a rather dubious sort of chap. I’m guessing they won’t to be doing good works in local orphanages.
I’m hoping for a happy ending, but I’m not going to get my hopes up.
This ‘friend’ of Castle sounds a rather dubious sort of chap. I’m guessing they won’t to be doing good works in local orphanages.
I’m hoping for a happy ending, but I’m not going to get my hopes up.