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8/15/2020 c2 5CinemaBane
Apologies in advance for the wall of text, got a little excited lol.

I think Commander Fox is pretty underrated when it comes to his character being covered in fanfiction works as well as actually just being intriguing in general. When he is included, he's more often than not painted as the bad guy, even among his own brothers, and I personally believe that Fox doesn't get enough credit dealing with politicians and a city-world that doesn't understand/appreciate him and what the rest of the Coruscant Guard/clones sacrifice in order to protect them.

I feel that certain situations like when he had to chase Ahsoka after she was framed and shoot Fives were not his fault and simply out of his hands. Because, more often than not, there were exterior factors that forced his hand (Palpatine probably being creepy and manipulative, Barriss being the true mastermind behind the temple bombing and murders) and he was simply doing his job at the end of the day.

Anyway, I had previously noticed that there wasn't an option to select him in the character menu, and personally that just confused me, since he was a reasonably involved character in TCW and you'd figure people would want to make fanfiction expanding on his character.

But now the he's here, all is good and well and we have you to thank for it, so cheers :-)
8/12/2020 c5 3Bad Wolffe
Loved this, so cool!
8/10/2020 c5 16DrowsyBadger
I came across Fanart for this story on Instagram. I fell in love with this pairing through the art, and so decided to send out the fic and read it. And it did not disappoint. It's charming and numerous, and gives Fox a bit more personality than the generally associated "The guy who shot Fives"
8/10/2020 c5 7CloneWars7567
I loooooooooove it!
The chat at the beginning cracked me up. “Hypothetically” of course. And the pastries were just so cute! I am very attached to Looper. Please don’t kill him now!
8/9/2020 c5 32Ryan1017
I wonder what she will do when Fox arrests her best friend.
8/9/2020 c5 13236792
I love how Riyo makes the clones feel like people too. Because they are.
The romance is moving along! I'm just giggling to myself about their simultaneous interest and obliviousness XD
8/9/2020 c5 Akira-Hayama
Wholesome story so far, especially considering it’s a pretty rare pairing for either Fox and Riyo. Don’t think I’ve ever read a story with them being the main couple, so it’s an interesting concept.

Also glad to see Fox getting some love despite the fandom hating him, as well as Riyo getting some attention. Underrated character imo, so it’s a nice change.

Interesting relationship you’ve built for them so far. Borderline between close acquaintances, to friendship. Hints of romance there, but not too much; probably more on the lines of adoration. Can’t wait to see how you’ll further it in the story, and how far you’ll go with it.

Good chapter overall. Till next time!
8/9/2020 c5 Abi-chan fiction fan
AAAAAH THE FLUFF ! This is adorable, my heart is melting ! The intro with Cody had me in tears XD what are they up to, hmm ?
8/1/2020 c4 7CloneWars7567
Awwwww! Her protecting Looper is the cutest thing ever! Cuchi is honestly just so great ;)
8/1/2020 c4 13236792
Ha! Riyo was awake the whole time? Sneaky...
And I love the idea of her refusing to leave and helping the clones fight :)
8/1/2020 c4 Abi-chan fiction fan
The denial is strong with this one XD
8/1/2020 c4 1Lord Grise
Now where did a Senator get so calm, collected, and most of all competent in a firefight...? oooo, things get deeper - and stickier...
7/30/2020 c3 1Cemalidor
Wow, this keeps getting better and better! Absolutiely loving it.
7/30/2020 c3 13236792
He gave her a blaster and she gave him a bracelet! IT'S LIKE RINGS! Or maybe I'm just too eager for their relationship to move forward... hee hee it's so fun watching Fox fumbling around :D
Uh, in the beginning, Riyo says "good morning" and Fox says "good afternoon." Was he just that nervous, or...
7/30/2020 c3 Abi-chan fiction fan
Aaaaww. Falling in love. It's like falling asleep: slowly at first, then all at once :)
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