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9/24/2021 c1 5The Vulture Queen

I really like the ideas of what you’ve presented so far. The six canister belt and flash drive of doom feel like they might as well be canon. And I do like the idea of an X-23 mission fic since I can’t recall reading one before (and I’ve read A LOT) of Laura fic. Pretty much all of it…

The main problem is that your spelling is bad. Bad to the point where I had trouble reading in parts. Thankfully, bad grammar and spelling are easier to fix than bad ideas. Just get a beta. Please, get one before the next chapter.

In the meantime, a mussel is a type of shellfish. A muscle is a body part.
8/2/2020 c1 6imaxmovies
I enjoyed the first chapter of your story a lot

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