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1/17 c14 James Birdsong
Good chapter in my opinion
12/20/2020 c13 10Mitsuki81
I think I know who Muta is, haha!
as for Toto, he has suspicions, doesn't he?
12/14/2020 c2 3Mad Jaggs
can't tell if the "mother" is evil or legitimately worried because of the cat king
12/12/2020 c13 James Birdsong
This is nifty
11/29/2020 c12 James Birdsong
Nice two chapters
11/15/2020 c10 12BookRookie12
oh dear oh dear. I'd thought she might be Louise, but this is . A GUT PUNCH, TO SAY THE LEAST. TT-TT
11/15/2020 c4 BookRookie12
lots more sarcasm from Haru, I'm guessing because she actually knows what sarcasm is at this point, no offense to Rapunzel. I like it though!

the image of Baron when he says "Are you sure I can't just buy you lunch and call it quits?" is very vivid.
11/15/2020 c3 BookRookie12
I assume she's talking about the Cat King here, and at least she's not doing the "the whole world is evil" thing. this is a whole lot more sympathetic and definitely more believable lmao.

Baron blinking awake and Haru panicking and bringing the cane down on him was no doubt painful for poor Baron, but hilarious for me.
11/15/2020 c2 BookRookie12
HAHAHAHA, this is such a wild, beautiful ride. "My muscle is as pulled as it was ten minutes ago" cracked me up at last, and I'm still laughing.
11/15/2020 c1 BookRookie12
well that was a twist! I wasn't expecting the lady-in-waiting, lmao, or the human king's death. RIP human queen :/
11/6/2020 c10 2WitchesBrew2
I really hope you update soon because I so want more of this. I just cant get enough!
11/5/2020 c10 10Mitsuki81
aaaargh... cliffhanger...!
amazing story!
10/28/2020 c10 James Birdsong
Groovy
10/27/2020 c10 E-man-dy-S
Oh man, what a chapter! Everything's getting complex and crazy! It's great!
Thank you posting.
10/3/2020 c9 James Birdsong
This is a good chapter
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