for The Colonial Familiar8/23/2021 c5 
3Fyr RedNight
Interesting story so far. The plot is original and your way of blending the two franchises is pretty well thought out.
I wonder what'll happen in the next chapters.
3Fyr RedNightInteresting story so far. The plot is original and your way of blending the two franchises is pretty well thought out.
I wonder what'll happen in the next chapters.
6/19/2021 c5 29Sakura Lisel
Louise’s mom is crazy. Karin is taking her COMATOSE daughter, who hasn’t woken up since the day Saito was summoned, and do what exactly? How’s she going to marry Louise to her fiancé if she’s not even awake to participate in the wedding ceremony and doesn’t look like she’s going to wake up any time soon? Even the fiancé should be against the plan, because if Louise EVER wakes up, how are they going to explain to her that she’s somehow NOW married when the last thing she remembers is being in school doing the familiar summoning ceremony? *lol*
Aw… I was hoping that Karin would have caught up with Saito in this chapter.
29Sakura LiselLouise’s mom is crazy. Karin is taking her COMATOSE daughter, who hasn’t woken up since the day Saito was summoned, and do what exactly? How’s she going to marry Louise to her fiancé if she’s not even awake to participate in the wedding ceremony and doesn’t look like she’s going to wake up any time soon? Even the fiancé should be against the plan, because if Louise EVER wakes up, how are they going to explain to her that she’s somehow NOW married when the last thing she remembers is being in school doing the familiar summoning ceremony? *lol*
Aw… I was hoping that Karin would have caught up with Saito in this chapter.
8/9/2020 c1 5Mend1cant Bias
I wanna state to the review below, the Colonial’s religion is based off the Greek gods (or well, a portion of them) so it’s more like a gibberish title for Saito. Saito also doesn’t sound that colonial
5Mend1cant BiasI wanna state to the review below, the Colonial’s religion is based off the Greek gods (or well, a portion of them) so it’s more like a gibberish title for Saito. Saito also doesn’t sound that colonial
8/8/2020 c1 The Perfect Getaway
Gandlfr is a dwarf in Norse Mythology. It also means left hand of god in Louise's world. So unless Saito is already in ZnT universe when he was given that title, that would mean he is pratically being called "shorty" by his comrades.
Gandlfr is a dwarf in Norse Mythology. It also means left hand of god in Louise's world. So unless Saito is already in ZnT universe when he was given that title, that would mean he is pratically being called "shorty" by his comrades.