for Knights and lemons1/8 c14 Guest
Not gonna lie I wish there was a Nora's Arc lemon here but still you did good mate.
Not gonna lie I wish there was a Nora's Arc lemon here but still you did good mate.
10/1/2023 c4 ranjira1988
Blake with a deadpan stare : * thinking * ( They totally screwed like rabbits didn't they? )
Blake with a deadpan stare : * thinking * ( They totally screwed like rabbits didn't they? )
6/2/2023 c2 
11Kamiro G.S
Welp. I can't figure out how to delete your own reviews, so disregard my earlier one.
This story isn't for me, but it doesn't deserve wanton criticism with the intention of flaming.
Write what you want.
11Kamiro G.SWelp. I can't figure out how to delete your own reviews, so disregard my earlier one.
This story isn't for me, but it doesn't deserve wanton criticism with the intention of flaming.
Write what you want.
6/2/2023 c1 Kamiro G.S
Maybe don't use jaune as your thinly-veiled autor SI to fulfil your depraved sexual fantasies? Might actually make something good instead of this cringfest.
Maybe don't use jaune as your thinly-veiled autor SI to fulfil your depraved sexual fantasies? Might actually make something good instead of this cringfest.
5/29/2023 c17 23Essiter1987
Somehow, I oddly okay with the level of BDSM in this chapter. Maybe because it's Yang. She's a tough girl (Mostly) and can handle herself pretty well. Also, it was complicit. Which is very important.
I think the reason I don't like the Blake chapters is the whole part with Cardin. Everything else was fine. Especially, the second chapter (Have no idea why a certain portion of the fandom thins Blake is into roleplaying, but I love it.)
I have never been in a relationship, and I'll be completely honest, there are parts to it that I find uncomfortable in regards to sex. I don't like the idea of BDSM, or blowjobs for that matter, but I also know that a significant part of it is trusting yourself and your partner(s) with how far you are willing to go.
Thanks for writing this. It was a good chapter. Love that Yang immediately wants to get back at Jaune. Perfect encapsulation of Dragonslayer, to me.
Also, did you release the Neo chapter for this series because the next chapter of Smoke and Mirrors was largely about her? That be pretty cool if it was.
23Essiter1987Somehow, I oddly okay with the level of BDSM in this chapter. Maybe because it's Yang. She's a tough girl (Mostly) and can handle herself pretty well. Also, it was complicit. Which is very important.
I think the reason I don't like the Blake chapters is the whole part with Cardin. Everything else was fine. Especially, the second chapter (Have no idea why a certain portion of the fandom thins Blake is into roleplaying, but I love it.)
I have never been in a relationship, and I'll be completely honest, there are parts to it that I find uncomfortable in regards to sex. I don't like the idea of BDSM, or blowjobs for that matter, but I also know that a significant part of it is trusting yourself and your partner(s) with how far you are willing to go.
Thanks for writing this. It was a good chapter. Love that Yang immediately wants to get back at Jaune. Perfect encapsulation of Dragonslayer, to me.
Also, did you release the Neo chapter for this series because the next chapter of Smoke and Mirrors was largely about her? That be pretty cool if it was.
5/27/2023 c17 3RonaldM40196867
So Yang gives public blowjobs.
Movie theaters are fun.
They have a spare dog collar.
Happy May!
3RonaldM40196867So Yang gives public blowjobs.
Movie theaters are fun.
They have a spare dog collar.
Happy May!
5/23/2023 c16 23Essiter1987
Well, I asked for a Silent Knight and I was not disappointed. Nice. I can easily see a followup later on. Now who will be next I wonder?
23Essiter1987Well, I asked for a Silent Knight and I was not disappointed. Nice. I can easily see a followup later on. Now who will be next I wonder?
5/20/2023 c16 thunderknight009
Nice chapter! Silent knight has been growing on me ever since I started reading fanfiction a year ago so it’s always wonderful to see well written ones. I’m excited for your next chapter!
Nice chapter! Silent knight has been growing on me ever since I started reading fanfiction a year ago so it’s always wonderful to see well written ones. I’m excited for your next chapter!