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8/20 c1 Ppinacoladaa
Please consider getting a beta reader to help with the grammar. You have some great ideas with your story plots but it can be rather difficult at times to interpret the scenes in the story.
8/9 c1 vcspencer06
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8/8 c1 vcfspen
I think your stories could flow much better, if you got someone who understood English to read before posting.
8/7 c1 Ariel Guest
I do hope Admiral Nelson and his crew will find Captain Lee Crane.
8/6 c2 Deb allen
Why write an unfinished story? Is there a sequel

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