for Percy Is Good With Trajectory Weapons4/18 c6 gurtuqyrtiuqrytu
its been a while since your last update but plz update
its been a while since your last update but plz update
4/16 c2 Guest
are you sure that's a tri-dent?
are you sure that's a tri-dent?
10/3/2021 c2 
1ines1808
Ok, can't believe i have to say this but a Trident is a three pronged spear. Just because Aquaman's has 5 progs doesn't mean it's a Trident. It's more like a fork
1ines1808Ok, can't believe i have to say this but a Trident is a three pronged spear. Just because Aquaman's has 5 progs doesn't mean it's a Trident. It's more like a fork
8/26/2021 c6 wandering reader
I wonder if you'll continue this? I hope you would. The story is built by an interesting premise. So, I can say that it's promising. I hope you're well and will give an update soon.
Kudos!
I wonder if you'll continue this? I hope you would. The story is built by an interesting premise. So, I can say that it's promising. I hope you're well and will give an update soon.
Kudos!
7/22/2021 c1 170Qoheleth
Dear Hp:
I don't know where Chiron gets the idea that the Musae were virgin goddesses. I once researched this for a Subreality story, and my encyclopedia listed every one of them as the definite or possible mother of somebody or other: the Sirens, as you say, but also Orpheus, Hyacinthus, and the Corybantes, among others.
Sincerely,
Qoheleth
P.S.: Glad you liked "B-Arking Up the Wrong Hometree", by the way.
170QohelethDear Hp:
I don't know where Chiron gets the idea that the Musae were virgin goddesses. I once researched this for a Subreality story, and my encyclopedia listed every one of them as the definite or possible mother of somebody or other: the Sirens, as you say, but also Orpheus, Hyacinthus, and the Corybantes, among others.
Sincerely,
Qoheleth
P.S.: Glad you liked "B-Arking Up the Wrong Hometree", by the way.
6/30/2021 c6 5WhereBeginningsEnd
This fic is so good! I love the minor changes to Percy's character, though he is still fundamentally Percy! The writing flows well and the dialogue isn't stunted and you're doing a good job of showing instead of telling which is a rare thing with most fics. I'm excited to see where the story leads after this.
5WhereBeginningsEndThis fic is so good! I love the minor changes to Percy's character, though he is still fundamentally Percy! The writing flows well and the dialogue isn't stunted and you're doing a good job of showing instead of telling which is a rare thing with most fics. I'm excited to see where the story leads after this.
4/16/2021 c6 Gryzz
I and I bet a lot of other people would love to see more of this story done!
I and I bet a lot of other people would love to see more of this story done!
1/13/2021 c6 18IAmOutOfIdeas
This wasn’t short, it was microscopic. That aside, I’m really enjoying the story and can’t wait for the next update
18IAmOutOfIdeasThis wasn’t short, it was microscopic. That aside, I’m really enjoying the story and can’t wait for the next update
12/26/2020 c6 1PurpleBunny5540
Hey. I’m back. I was on this site during an emotionally hard time, and have been working up the courage to open the app again. It’ll be a while before I’m fully back, but I figured the holidays are a good time for new beginnings. I still think this story is awesome, maybe try blending chapters a little more so that they are a teensy bit longer?
1PurpleBunny5540Hey. I’m back. I was on this site during an emotionally hard time, and have been working up the courage to open the app again. It’ll be a while before I’m fully back, but I figured the holidays are a good time for new beginnings. I still think this story is awesome, maybe try blending chapters a little more so that they are a teensy bit longer?