
9/6/2020 c32
11elizabethB88
Hehe, love all the squealing making Lee swerve. And how sweet that they're adopting THREE kids! Awesome!

Hehe, love all the squealing making Lee swerve. And how sweet that they're adopting THREE kids! Awesome!
9/6/2020 c31 Pharmama
A crooked smile, raking fingers through his hair and thinking about a proposal makes for a wonderful chapter.
A crooked smile, raking fingers through his hair and thinking about a proposal makes for a wonderful chapter.
9/5/2020 c31 Pharmama
Love getting both Elizabeth's and Nathan's thoughts when they are alone in their roo. ms. Everyone is on the same page. Thanks Lee for being helpful. Looking forto the next chapter.
Love getting both Elizabeth's and Nathan's thoughts when they are alone in their roo. ms. Everyone is on the same page. Thanks Lee for being helpful. Looking forto the next chapter.
9/4/2020 c30
7CKJustice
Chapters 28-30 are absolutely perfect! I love that Lee and Rosemary are along as chaperones. It’s perfect that there is no awkwardness in checking in. I love the red roses and the beautiful red ball gown. Also the Winter Wonderland for the Ball. The Christmas shopping was beautiful, too and so much fun! You knocked the Mountie Ball and everything surrounding it out of the park, and ended it all perfectly! A huge thank you!

Chapters 28-30 are absolutely perfect! I love that Lee and Rosemary are along as chaperones. It’s perfect that there is no awkwardness in checking in. I love the red roses and the beautiful red ball gown. Also the Winter Wonderland for the Ball. The Christmas shopping was beautiful, too and so much fun! You knocked the Mountie Ball and everything surrounding it out of the park, and ended it all perfectly! A huge thank you!
9/4/2020 c30 Guest
Outstanding ️
Outstanding ️
9/4/2020 c30 Andi
So sweet
So sweet
9/4/2020 c30 Guest
Awe!
Awe!
9/3/2020 c29 Rockchelle
Oh my goodness! Loved the last few chapters. So glad Ally can call Nathan dad & Emily Davenport came to the rescue! Nathan and Ally’s excitement to do something special for Elizabeth was so cute. Love how you brought back the Mountie ball & how nervous & excited Nathan is to take Elizabeth! Surprising Elizabeth with the dress was adorable from Ally ! The roses from Nathan were just perfect...sigh...So romantic! Can’t wait to read about the ball & more upcoming romance between Nathan & Elizabeth! Well done!
Oh my goodness! Loved the last few chapters. So glad Ally can call Nathan dad & Emily Davenport came to the rescue! Nathan and Ally’s excitement to do something special for Elizabeth was so cute. Love how you brought back the Mountie ball & how nervous & excited Nathan is to take Elizabeth! Surprising Elizabeth with the dress was adorable from Ally ! The roses from Nathan were just perfect...sigh...So romantic! Can’t wait to read about the ball & more upcoming romance between Nathan & Elizabeth! Well done!
9/4/2020 c30 Pharmama
The Mountie Ball was perfectly written with a thread of both Elizabeth's and Nathan's mountie history throughout the ball. Allowing each to see some of the others past. Finishing the chapter with the little words for each of them was beautiful.
The Mountie Ball was perfectly written with a thread of both Elizabeth's and Nathan's mountie history throughout the ball. Allowing each to see some of the others past. Finishing the chapter with the little words for each of them was beautiful.
9/4/2020 c30 SaSeLi777
I’m so glad Elizabeth realized she loves Nathan! And I’m glad for their beautiful overnight trip to the Mountie ball...with chaperones!
Beautiful dress description! And what a beautiful gift from Ally with Rosemary’s help! Such a thoughtful daughter-to-be and friend!
The entire description of their trip: the shopping, the dressing, the flowers, the ball itselfwas interestingly beautiful and personal! I appreciated NE’s interactions with Superintendents O’Reilly and Collins! There are not too many women that have crossed Nathan’s path that would have their own long, rich history with the Mounties! Your story made it much clearer! Loved it!
I’m so glad Elizabeth realized she loves Nathan! And I’m glad for their beautiful overnight trip to the Mountie ball...with chaperones!
Beautiful dress description! And what a beautiful gift from Ally with Rosemary’s help! Such a thoughtful daughter-to-be and friend!
The entire description of their trip: the shopping, the dressing, the flowers, the ball itselfwas interestingly beautiful and personal! I appreciated NE’s interactions with Superintendents O’Reilly and Collins! There are not too many women that have crossed Nathan’s path that would have their own long, rich history with the Mounties! Your story made it much clearer! Loved it!
9/4/2020 c30
11elizabethB88
So sweet, so romantic. Love the interaction with Collins. And the two of them finally said they love each other! Awesome.

So sweet, so romantic. Love the interaction with Collins. And the two of them finally said they love each other! Awesome.
9/3/2020 c29 Pharmama
Nathan will not be late for their very important date and Rosemary is a wizard! I love these Easter eggs you have woven into this chapter. The replay on the Union City trip was beautifully written and and so. much fun to read. Looking forward to the ball!
Nathan will not be late for their very important date and Rosemary is a wizard! I love these Easter eggs you have woven into this chapter. The replay on the Union City trip was beautifully written and and so. much fun to read. Looking forward to the ball!