for The Maelstrom Jedi6/21 c39 killerssg
Good chapter. I'm glad that these chapters are actually aligning with the show in the timeline rather than episodes that came in the show. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Good chapter. I'm glad that these chapters are actually aligning with the show in the timeline rather than episodes that came in the show. Can't wait for the next chapter.
6/21 c39 Borello
good work.
good work.
6/20 c39 Guest
Is there any possible way to ad darth talon to the harem please
Is there any possible way to ad darth talon to the harem please
6/20 c39 thor94
Wow big trouble for republic thks dooku and palpatine dirty moves.
Hope you plan naruto soon balance the losses, by causing this time a massive disaster in palpatine side (like naruto pull a move to take huge amount of money from separatist and banking clan to feed republic chests and pull an even bigger wrench in palpatine plan)
Wow big trouble for republic thks dooku and palpatine dirty moves.
Hope you plan naruto soon balance the losses, by causing this time a massive disaster in palpatine side (like naruto pull a move to take huge amount of money from separatist and banking clan to feed republic chests and pull an even bigger wrench in palpatine plan)
6/20 c39 
10Power of Magic
That was quite a chapter, and I look forward to what you have planned in the next one. Hope that the Jedi Temple has been built (or is being built) near Konoha, and that a few Jedi Knights, maybe some Masters and Padawans are living there
10Power of MagicThat was quite a chapter, and I look forward to what you have planned in the next one. Hope that the Jedi Temple has been built (or is being built) near Konoha, and that a few Jedi Knights, maybe some Masters and Padawans are living there
6/20 c39 Ryu wolf
Great job with this chapter, I also think naruto, ayla and ventress should go on a group date
Great job with this chapter, I also think naruto, ayla and ventress should go on a group date
6/10 c38 Darcy
hoping more chapters are on here soon
hoping more chapters are on here soon
6/10 c38 killerssg
I like how this is going so far. I'm curious in how certain chapters will be written regarding certain episodes of the show such as when Obiwan goes undercover if he will or Naruto will. Another one is the citadel arc and if Naruto will go with them as well. This is great writing though.
I like how this is going so far. I'm curious in how certain chapters will be written regarding certain episodes of the show such as when Obiwan goes undercover if he will or Naruto will. Another one is the citadel arc and if Naruto will go with them as well. This is great writing though.
6/9 c38 Darcy
hoping for more chapters
hoping for more chapters
6/8 c38 Darcy
Hoping for more chapters and also hoping the chips are removed from the clones
Hoping for more chapters and also hoping the chips are removed from the clones