for The Maelstrom Jedi9/29 c3 DarkHunter10
I always thought that whole Padme gets attempted assassination thing was a little silly... I mean really.. An assassin is hired to kill her, so the assassin hires an assassin to assassinate the senator, with a droid but the droid is caught, that the heroes then follow back to the assassin, so the assassin then assassinates the assassin and gets away, just to protect the identity of the FIRST assassin (the guy that paid for all these dominoes to fall)... That just seems SOOO mind-mindbogglingly-overly-complicated... It's like "poisoning the rat, to cause the car crash"... "You poison the rat, the rat is caught by the cat, who eats the rat, gets poisoned then is attacked by the dog, who bites the cat and is poisoned, that walks out into the street, in front of the car that swerves to miss the dog and crashes."
I always thought that whole Padme gets attempted assassination thing was a little silly... I mean really.. An assassin is hired to kill her, so the assassin hires an assassin to assassinate the senator, with a droid but the droid is caught, that the heroes then follow back to the assassin, so the assassin then assassinates the assassin and gets away, just to protect the identity of the FIRST assassin (the guy that paid for all these dominoes to fall)... That just seems SOOO mind-mindbogglingly-overly-complicated... It's like "poisoning the rat, to cause the car crash"... "You poison the rat, the rat is caught by the cat, who eats the rat, gets poisoned then is attacked by the dog, who bites the cat and is poisoned, that walks out into the street, in front of the car that swerves to miss the dog and crashes."
9/26 c51 
11Power of Magic
Glad that Naruto was able to take care of Krell, and that he alerted the Jedi Council about there being others possibly like him. I hope that your enjoying the Ahsoka series, and that you'll hopefully use some of what's in the series in this fanfic
11Power of MagicGlad that Naruto was able to take care of Krell, and that he alerted the Jedi Council about there being others possibly like him. I hope that your enjoying the Ahsoka series, and that you'll hopefully use some of what's in the series in this fanfic
9/26 c51 Borello
great work
great work
9/25 c51 Ryu wolf
Great job with this chapter. If there is a way to bring Naruto’s mother kushina back from the dead. Naruto should take it
Great job with this chapter. If there is a way to bring Naruto’s mother kushina back from the dead. Naruto should take it
9/25 c51 Razberry17
interesting take on the battle of umbara it a good thing naruto got there in time to save more clones also maybe going to get rid of the jedis with higher clone death rates but now i wonder are we going back to the naruto homeworld or we going to the Zygerrian slaver arc be interesting to see how naruto and zule deal with them
well keep up the good work ciao
interesting take on the battle of umbara it a good thing naruto got there in time to save more clones also maybe going to get rid of the jedis with higher clone death rates but now i wonder are we going back to the naruto homeworld or we going to the Zygerrian slaver arc be interesting to see how naruto and zule deal with them
well keep up the good work ciao
9/12 c50 Borello
really good work
really good work
9/11 c50 11Power of Magic
Glad that Naruto had sometime off, and that he was able to have some time with Anko and Barriss. Here's hoping that Naruto will be able to keep Barriss from doing what she does in the anime, and that he'll be able to stop the clone that kills one of the Jedi twin sisters
11Power of MagicGlad that Naruto had sometime off, and that he was able to have some time with Anko and Barriss. Here's hoping that Naruto will be able to keep Barriss from doing what she does in the anime, and that he'll be able to stop the clone that kills one of the Jedi twin sisters
9/11 c50 Guest
awesome lemons on AO3, glad both Anko and Barriss got some alone time with Naruto
awesome lemons on AO3, glad both Anko and Barriss got some alone time with Naruto