for The Maelstrom Jedi Book I6/11 c77 Just guessing
I stumbled upon this and gave it a read, and after finally reading it, you’ve had my curiosity, but now, now you have my attention, though I wish there was a sequel to this story cause I really want to know what happened. A fantastic story nonetheless
I stumbled upon this and gave it a read, and after finally reading it, you’ve had my curiosity, but now, now you have my attention, though I wish there was a sequel to this story cause I really want to know what happened. A fantastic story nonetheless
6/11 c77 Mr. E Guest
Holy smokes I managed to read the entire story for a few days what took you five years to finish, I can’t for the sequel to come, Although I’ve got questions will ladies from both Naruto as well as from Star Wars be added to his Harem (hopefully Asajj Ventress among many more to come). Will Kanohagakure especially the surviving members of the Jedi Order as well as the Clones Soldiers help out during the Rebels and BadBatch series storyline. Will Naruto gain more power along the way (specifically the Rinnegan) to ensure “Madara Uchiha” or anyone else get their greedy claws on it. Those are my questions, but other than that Epic Story
Holy smokes I managed to read the entire story for a few days what took you five years to finish, I can’t for the sequel to come, Although I’ve got questions will ladies from both Naruto as well as from Star Wars be added to his Harem (hopefully Asajj Ventress among many more to come). Will Kanohagakure especially the surviving members of the Jedi Order as well as the Clones Soldiers help out during the Rebels and BadBatch series storyline. Will Naruto gain more power along the way (specifically the Rinnegan) to ensure “Madara Uchiha” or anyone else get their greedy claws on it. Those are my questions, but other than that Epic Story
6/9 c22 thedarkwolf95
You do know the clones are regular humans right, and that the clone armor really only protects from environmental effects and low to mid level blaster shots. So how do 10 special forces humans, defeat 150 superhumans that can punch through stone, move at the speed of sound, and have weapons that would pierce clone armor that also can explode?
You do know the clones are regular humans right, and that the clone armor really only protects from environmental effects and low to mid level blaster shots. So how do 10 special forces humans, defeat 150 superhumans that can punch through stone, move at the speed of sound, and have weapons that would pierce clone armor that also can explode?
6/1 c77 Borello
good work
good work
5/30 c77 Guest02957
Awesome chapter! I'm sorry I didn't review this chapter yesterday. I was so tired from working at my new job that I went straight to bed. I love how you had Naruto go to Mount Myōboku to start his sage training. I also love how you had Fukasaku tell Naruto about he and Shima helped with Jiraiya's Sage Mode. Will Naruto use Tailed Beast Sage Mode against Pain since he has Kurama's cooperation? Will Naruto be able to enter Tailed Beast Mode directly from Nine-Tails Chakra Mode like Minato does in canon? These are just suggestions since this is your story and you can write it however you want.
Anyway, awesome chapter and keep up the great work!
Awesome chapter! I'm sorry I didn't review this chapter yesterday. I was so tired from working at my new job that I went straight to bed. I love how you had Naruto go to Mount Myōboku to start his sage training. I also love how you had Fukasaku tell Naruto about he and Shima helped with Jiraiya's Sage Mode. Will Naruto use Tailed Beast Sage Mode against Pain since he has Kurama's cooperation? Will Naruto be able to enter Tailed Beast Mode directly from Nine-Tails Chakra Mode like Minato does in canon? These are just suggestions since this is your story and you can write it however you want.
Anyway, awesome chapter and keep up the great work!
5/30 c2 thedarkwolf95
The Black Sun have existed since the time of The Old Republic; no way would they be a new organization right before The Clone Wars
The Black Sun have existed since the time of The Old Republic; no way would they be a new organization right before The Clone Wars
5/30 c77 
14Power of Magic
Well, looks like things are getting interesting now and I wonder how Sage Mode will enhance Naruto's Force abilities. Here's hoping that Naruto will appear in the Leaf Village much sooner then he does in the anime and I can just imagine his reaction, when he learns about the message Ay sent to Tsunade
14Power of MagicWell, looks like things are getting interesting now and I wonder how Sage Mode will enhance Naruto's Force abilities. Here's hoping that Naruto will appear in the Leaf Village much sooner then he does in the anime and I can just imagine his reaction, when he learns about the message Ay sent to Tsunade
5/29 c77 Guest497
One Naruto as a Jedi is strong enough to fight pain and defeat him. Two I hope Sakura is part of the harem. Three Naruto better not be weaker than sasuke. Otherwise great chapter.
One Naruto as a Jedi is strong enough to fight pain and defeat him. Two I hope Sakura is part of the harem. Three Naruto better not be weaker than sasuke. Otherwise great chapter.
5/29 c77 5Gamelover41592
Awesome work and uh oh 0-0
Let me know when the sequel is up and thanks for a great fanfic :)
5Gamelover41592Awesome work and uh oh 0-0
Let me know when the sequel is up and thanks for a great fanfic :)