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4/23 c49 Guest
Man, I love this fic, but it's just such a slog to get through. I feel like you write too much stuff in between the chapters concerning the main plot, and it ends up feeling like I'm reading 50% plot and 50% filler. I understand that you do want to flesh out your story and your world, and I respect that a lot(god knows more authors need to do that), but it feels too much. I was especially excited after volume 3(4? forgot) and I kept checking the fic every few days, but every time you updated I was just progressively getting more and more disappointed to see flashback chapters, and now I don't feel any anticipation anymore when waiting for new chapters. I don't want to see Hikigaya for all of the fic, but it feels like nothing is hapoening for 200k words. I know I'm just one reader amongst thousands so it doesn't really matter if I keep reading or not. So I'll just say thanks for the ride, but this is where I get off now.
4/18 c49 10RANGER1863
La gran expedición se acerca y realmente no puede esperar a ver lo que pasará

Muy buen capítulo realmente me encantó sigue trabajando así
4/14 c49 Hachiman fan
Ouch. Thought they going to move out this chapter. Still waiting. Until next time, stay healthy and stay safe.
4/14 c49 8CRUDEN
They're still friends!
4/13 c49 codywhite162
This story continues to be amazing and I cannot wait to find out what happens next.
4/13 c49 bluecookie420
It's kind of crazy to think the timeskip and irl time have lined up. I'm hoping Hachiman finally get's some relief this volume! Awesome stuff as usual.
4/12 c49 fornaxosvavillion
Good chapter but as you said it a little short :)
4/12 c49 Siorre L'anthii
Hackard's gonna die. Or atleast severely injured
4/12 c49 bon2k5
Good
3/29 c48 Memer
How kind of that OC excelia packet which happens to be a fitting opposition to Hachimans character due to his outlook to be heading into the same battlefield as our protagonist right when could use a level up feat.

I'm so excited!
3/29 c48 codywhite162
Excellent chapter! Looking forward to what happens next
3/18 c48 Hachiman fan
This is where the fun begin. Until next time, stay healthy and stay safe.
3/18 c48 CRUDEN
Pretty cool easy to write Thanatos
3/17 c48 Jocag
Let's gooooo
We are revving up!
3/16 c48 Niuzu0130
Almost there
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