
10/23/2020 c3 SkeletalReader
potato. potato. potato. sorry for saying potato. but your story seems interesting.
potato. potato. potato. sorry for saying potato. but your story seems interesting.
9/24/2020 c2 Slaggedfire
An improvement with the capitalization, but the punctuation could use some work.
An improvement with the capitalization, but the punctuation could use some work.
8/8/2020 c1 Guest
Even better the second time!
Even better the second time!
8/9/2020 c1 piotrasek18
That moment when the summary is much longer and far more interesting than the story
That moment when the summary is much longer and far more interesting than the story
8/9/2020 c1
1Xcutioner
BRUH... it's you again lmao... Honestly I believe the Renji fic is better written as it was 4x as long as this one... and the capitalization was better in that one.

BRUH... it's you again lmao... Honestly I believe the Renji fic is better written as it was 4x as long as this one... and the capitalization was better in that one.
8/8/2020 c1 Quaestor
Took me a while to read it all, but I have a lot of time thanks to quarantine. Some very odd word choice, but you manage to tell the story very well. Only complaint is one capitalization error in the first paragraph. Other than that, keep the chapters coming!
Took me a while to read it all, but I have a lot of time thanks to quarantine. Some very odd word choice, but you manage to tell the story very well. Only complaint is one capitalization error in the first paragraph. Other than that, keep the chapters coming!