4/22 c56 andremartins511
Uma história épica, e um final muito melhor do que o da série!
Mas fala sério essa coisa de inserir partes de pessoas e citações de um futuro distante sobre um estudo das ações do rei daeron, você se inspirou em Testamentos de Margareth Atwood não é?

3/18 c1 Reicecane
why dont you shut the fuck up guest who is just below me because it seems to me uou didnt read the book well, it was never confirmed whether jon griff is actually aegon and not just a blackfyre seeing as the only one who said he swapped the child is varys... how do you swap a valyrian child so easily, especially one who has the full valyrian features abd not swap the sister, who looks even more common than him in the seven kingdoms?... in my opinion that aegon in the books is just what he is believed to be...a blackfyre(especially since the golden company will only willingly follow a blackfyre, even if it is one pretending to be Targaryen).
varys is the only one qho actually knows the truth and the writer of the game of thrones books never confirm if its a real Targaryen or a mere pretender sp keep your opinion to yourself and stop insulting people's work.

3/18 c50 Guest
what a shit conclusion for aegon, like fuck dawg unironically kill yourself for writing this assmeat chapter

3/18 c5 Guest
fucking get somewhere already this is a fuckin snoozefest

12/24/2024 c56 Guest
Nice job. I agree with some comments about people teleporting. It would take more than a year to move his armies around westeros, and suddenly having jon turn up outa nowhere sorta breaks the lack of fluidity of the work. You do say at points ‘oh, he got a ship from here and rose there’ or ‘his armies travelled to this port and sailed to that port’ or whatever, but as an afterthought ruins the mental tracking of his armies, and just sort of - as others have said - makes it seem like people are teleporting around.

But the fact that i, someone who is incredibly critical of works and will be blunt as fuck to writers when they mess up, have not excessively sworn or listed issues for days just goes to show the quality of the work. It could use a little fleshing out in places, maybe sections added to further explain jon’s troop movements or his own reasons for turning up and not just dropping his surprise appearance halfway across the continent out of nowhere (i get the need for suspense, but the way you executed it as said is poorly done - you could have had a short pov change at the climax before he turns up to explain his strategies and him travelling), but this was overall a great read. A solid 8/9 out of 10.

12/2/2024 c27 capitalist banter
Something cathartic about sticking it to all the Lannisters. But a blood feud sets a bad precident. Every lord will be thinking it fasionable to declare blood feuds. Ah well, it's just fantasy.

12/2/2024 c24 capitalist banter
Excellent speech