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8/17/2020 c4 asonia99
i'm pretty sure that the bolton levy won't take ramsay's bs , reduced food , siege, bad situation and outnumbered , with loyalty . they'd sooner gift jon ramsay's head on a silver plate imo .
and if jon shows up with a dragon too...

am i wrong or is jon trying to put rickon /a stark/ in winterfell , and then go south to take kings landing with his dragon and maybe a good marriage in order to get an army :
with marge , myrcella , and others out of the market jon's best bet would be to get suport from essos , but that would bring the !foregner! tag to hif family so unless he finds someone that brings lots of monies/soldiers/trade to the table he may as well settle for the best he can find in westeros :p
8/17/2020 c4 shadow-wild1
good tactic

Without cavalry, we will leave on a siege of winterfell
an interesting point winterfell is a large castle in westeros, it would be amazing that there is not several interior paths to hide, so attacking during a storm to hide the army while a commando opens the main gates.
8/17/2020 c4 1vyoom
Little finger captured early, and good riddance.
Though, Sansa character was changed and she advised Jon prior to the meeting with Petyr, IMHO, it would have been better if Jon found this out through warging.
Without cavalry, Bolton’s may not come out of Castle walls, Jon would have to use Dragon. It would be interesting to read, how you take this forward.
8/17/2020 c4 1Vallavarayan
Aah.. that’s in a normal society with normal trade goods.
What was done was an exaggerated to the extreme equivalent of someone taking Singapore and telling everyone there not to work for any foreign company. Most of their money Comes from people working on different have almost no other exports other than finished goods.
She was already the queen of several cities that she was taking really bad care of- then she leaves them under the care of a sell sword who killed his superiors because he lied how she looked! Even if Dario was not going to go bring back slavery, he could not have held the cities from other slavers with what little soldiers he had- and she took most of their ships(and burnt the rest) to come to westerosi- which would have made trade more difficult for those cities- which would have made it harder to get food to the people.
The slave cities imported most of their food and luxury items. With everyone freed and the city not allowed to export its main resource- people- no one had any money to buy anything. I am not saying that they should have continued slavery- but continued selling the tome of the former slaves and giving the money to the people instead of any master. That’s what happens in a lot of small countries even now- selling the time of the people to gain enough money to buy food and necessities.
If you go back, she DID do that- only she took the money for herself.

And think about her journey- she travelled with the Dothraki and had no problems with them taking slaves- she saved one person from being killed- and expected her undying gratitude while the rest of the witch’s village was being pillaged around her.
The first time we see her going against slavery is when she takes the unsullied by killing the masters- and she liked how it felt for all the people to worship her for “freeing them”. Trust me, if she had the money at the time, but no dragon to kill the masters, she would have bought the unsullied and kept them.

Remember, she had no problem with Jorah being a slavery as long as he was loyal to her.
8/17/2020 c4 4Lillian81
Hmmm smart move by Jon to use the Umber and Karstark children against their lords. Sometime you have to fight fire with Fire, or hostages with hostages I guess.
8/14/2020 c3 goblin
splendid
8/15/2020 c3 1vyoom
The blitzkrieg strikes were awesome. Jon using magic was fun to read. It was good that Ned Umber was left alive.
Kudos.
8/15/2020 c3 Suspect42
In your AN two things that stick out which are kind of misconceptions even if the show handled the concepts badly would be the fact that Iron Bank inevitable profits off the slave trade and Dany is functionally a foreign queen. Braavos is surrounded by lands that practice slavery and for the Iron Bank to have become so powerful its practically impossible that they have not supplied credit to slavers such that even if they would never write out a loan explicitly saying its for buying slaves they likely can read between the lines. From Tarly's perspective it does not matter if Dany technically was born in Westeros she was raised in Essos from birth because the reverse would be true if an Essosi born was raised in Westeros and of course Dany is also a foreign queen by virtue of being a queen of a foreign land.
8/15/2020 c3 2VioletScarf
House Umber broke faith with House Stark so Ned Umber, the last surviving Umber, should be sent to watch. Someone loyal to the Starks can be rewarded with the lordship. By the way, Jon's personality seems more cruel to his enemies than the books so I wonder if he is planning to wipe out Freys to the last baby...
8/14/2020 c3 qwertypous
i dont think so, i was thinking more about jon using rune magic to enchant the armor and sword of his army. example would be to make the sword weight less or effective against the wight, armor that has temperature protection and also less weight. anymore usess but not OP
8/14/2020 c3 javi30
Very good chapter
Keep writing.
Blessings and good health to you and your loved ones
8/12/2020 c2 Guest
Jon needs to take House Umber to save Rikon from being given to Ramsey.
8/12/2020 c2 Guest
...hiding HER fiery head... Day's biggest error was favoring one dragon over the others to the point of chaining the two that did nothing wrong in the dark while making no effort to control Drogon. She moved to fast in her conquests and never consolidated her hold on the first city before moving on to the next.
8/14/2020 c3 4Lillian81
Jon’s topping through the north with a vengeance. It’s a shame Rickon wasn’t at last hearth anymore
8/12/2020 c1 Guest
Aegon as a name for Jon Always sucked ! Jea, Aemon, Any other seems better !
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