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12/2/2020 c1 tonytaker
I would love a continuation of this
9/18/2020 c1 9lilmisswriter17
A lovely one-shot! I agree, it's strange that they don't explore that possibility of Jeremy dying. I feel like you capture her feelings exactly as she would freak out if that had happened. Wonderful writing!
9/11/2020 c1 2Josh Xana
Very good job! Honestly your right try never really used Jeremy as the main target of Xana much, tho a few times they did. Like in the episode with the fake franz hopper.
8/14/2020 c1 9Paladin777
This was amazing. I like how you take your time and paint a picture of what's going on, and of how Aelita feels during this whole ordeal. Had I not known about the overall plot from our PM's, you certainly would have had me convinced! Nice work!

Another thing I really like is that you provide a proper falling action. The climax is obvious, but then you take the time to let us wind down. It made me feel very satisfied with the whole story as a whole!

Keep up the good work!
8/11/2020 c1 21latinVortex
You succeeded in making me cry. I hope you're happy;_;
I usually don't try reading "angst" fiction, it really scares me, especially when it's about the death of a major character, but after reading the summary I had to know what actually happened here.
How is it possible that you managed to broke my heart and just after that, to give me all the happiness I was needing for?
This story has so many beautiful details it deserves to be discussed word by word.
I've never thought until now about the "what if" Jeremy had died. What it could have meant for Aelita. For everyone. We know he took a lot of risks. And the price he was willing to pay to save Aelita and the others, unmeasurable.
It was a fantastic concept the one you came with. And the writing was perfect too! Thank you so much for sharing, hope you continue writing more jerlita. I really love it. ;w;
8/10/2020 c1 7Rafsolo
Wow! You really had us all going there. I thought he actually died!. Great story!

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