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8/26 c1 elicbxn
I realize that it can hard to show scene breaks, but I suspect there was one when Napoleon says "Now about that jelly..." and the next paragraph.

Other than this one thing, I really enjoyed this.
8/14 c1 Psyche53
Excellent! I love the stories in which one of the mother of our guys feel the need to help someone. And wow, your descriptions of the food have made me gain five pounds, lol! Well done!

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