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9/4/2020 c5 15h1n Z3r0
Well, don't have a lot of things to say about this chapter. It was great, as always.

Though, I may add, murderous, wants to fight, territorial, yeah seems like Gwimjow alright to me.
8/29/2020 c4 RandomName3064
all characters can be similar in different medias.

that doesnt mean it cant be Ruby at all. with how hollows are created, it can always be her personality mixing with others. just because her consciousness is in control, doesnt mean its all gonna be 'her' anymore.

but that would be something you would notice from people that know Ruby. nobody here does. so it actually works in your favor.
8/29/2020 c4 Firewyrm2
Any idea for how chapters this story might be? Moguera has had their stories erupt into being over a hundred chapters and by the sound of things this will be quite long as well.
8/29/2020 c4 5h1n Z3r0
Eyyy, Ruby finally met Starrk and Lilynette! And Neliel! Well, isn't hueco mundo a small place.

Jokes aside, nice to see she is getting involved with the right people... as right as they can get in Hueco Mundo at least.

Interested in seeing how this will all develop.

Now, this isn't exactly a question, and even if it was, there was no need to answer to keep from spoilers. But, I guess this is where Ruby takes a halt in her 'development' as in gaining power; Aizen hasn't even arived in Hueco yet, which gives Ruby at the very least some 200 years untill the main plot comes about, and if she follows her curve of becoming an adjucas in a few months, she will become a Vasto Lorde that can become a Starrk-like natural arrancar in half that time... which doesn't seem all that good.

Though, as a side note, when or if Ruby becomes an arrancar with a zanpakutou, what will be it's ressurecion command? Considering the zanpakutou needs to be in spanish but the command in japanese/english, I guess something like 'Bloom, Rosa Creciente' (Rosa Creciente Crescent Rose). On the same note, what could be her aspect of death? Hmmm... something interesting to think about really.

Well, will stop bothering you now, continue the good work skeleton.

PS: Good chapter, as always.
8/29/2020 c4 Juan Sebastian Borrero
I think when ruby returns, Salem will be
though i wonder if remmanet has reiatsu
8/29/2020 c4 Dragonborn2704
i can just imagine Ruby speed blizing someone and how glorius it would be.
8/26/2020 c3 RandomName3064
its a interesting start for a story.

im curious to how much worse Remnant is gonna be. cause lots of the plot forward from V3 was because of Ruby. now that she isnt there...

also, Ruby doesnt hate bad language like that. im so sick of people thinking 'child-like' means 'immature'. she didnt get like that when Tyrian legit called her a bitch, and her uncle is a drunk. she has for sure dealt with cursing before.
8/25/2020 c3 TooBad69
Also I just read one of the comments and at least from reading it, you made it sound like a large expanse of time is happening since getting to Huaco Mundo. It’s like your saying how long time has passed from A to B without actually saying it. Assuming that Aura preserves the body as well as sustains it for a while before dying to Food or Water deprivation then she could have been there for 1-2 weeks which increases the hallucinations she would experience b/c of time exposed to it. Then afterwards by not saying it decomposed faster you allow the reader to interpret that Gillian Ruby carries her body for the determined decomposing period till present in story. Sorry for the long winded responses my dood. Really like the story tho.
8/25/2020 c3 TooBad69
Oof. I need more, it’s so good. I really like the story as well as the atmospheric storytelling. The hallucinations before dying to still having those same instincts when becoming a hollow. This is great so far and I hope to see more. Also I’m assuming she will get a Vasto Lorde form at some point and I was wondering if it would just be her huntress self or if it would be closer to a cheetah esk hollow. The hollow one would be weird since there already is one of those in the show and I’d like to see something different. Maybe a Grimm/Hollow look when reaching Vasto Lorde? Keep up the good work though.
8/25/2020 c3 1Special fairing 15
Oh my... I can't wait to see, what reaction team WBY and team JNR, to see Ruby as arrancar

But sorry to say this
i want see Ruby to help people in renmant and cinder gets a fair return for what she has done and want to see happy ending too hehehe

Oh yeah keep up to good man, try not stop writer story,

And sorry if you don't know what i mean

8/25/2020 c3 Guest
Well, changing the rating of the fic. In the first place, the admins barely come here to check on anything anymore, pretty sure that if you wrote smutt no one would have a problem with it.
But surely, if you want to change, it depends. Are the dark parts going to be edgier than an average 4Chan user, or are they going to be 'light' dark parts?
Even then, change when you get to the dark parts, like this the people that don't and M rated to their filters will also be seing this. Which means more views.
8/25/2020 c3 15h1n Z3r0
Well, gotta say, the chapters (albeit smol) are extremelly well written, congrats!

And I guess I didn't say this last chapter, but I'm glad you're not making Ruby strong or special out of the blue just because main protagonist. With her progression being natural it will be much more fun. Even then, I don't think she will reach Starrk levels of stenght.

As a foot note: Sneezing a Bala? Really? What an absolute unit.

Ah yes, only a few months indeed. Thanks for the answer, and don't worry about being to long.

(PS: Don't worry about the rating, can change when the real dark part arrives.)
8/25/2020 c3 Zifryt
I think you can keep the T rating until the story get dark.

Can't wait for Ruby reaction at finding out that is her body.
8/25/2020 c3 Juan Sebastian Borrero
well there goes the rose walking in a world of death and sand
8/25/2020 c3 Dragonborn2704
wonder what is going to happen between Grimmjow and Ruby considering that they are both cats.

cant wait to read more.
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