for Xadia Alchemy11/7/2020 c3 Jared spaulding
Really good story I for one can't wait to see how you will continue it and I hope that you will find a way to add in scars destruction transmutation as well ot clud be a good thing to build a chapter around but your story your rules just a suggestion again in suspense for the next chapter hope to see it soon.
Really good story I for one can't wait to see how you will continue it and I hope that you will find a way to add in scars destruction transmutation as well ot clud be a good thing to build a chapter around but your story your rules just a suggestion again in suspense for the next chapter hope to see it soon.
9/4/2020 c2 
4ProfesorGoblitz
At this moment chapter 1 did several things
1) I very much despise Theo
2) I was reminded how much I hate harrow and his stupidity
3) and there was a grammar mistake in the Runaan vs Rayla
4ProfesorGoblitzAt this moment chapter 1 did several things
1) I very much despise Theo
2) I was reminded how much I hate harrow and his stupidity
3) and there was a grammar mistake in the Runaan vs Rayla
9/4/2020 c1 ProfesorGoblitz
Hmm you OC for alchemist
1). Don’t particularly like them
2). Most of those situations that dark magic solved would’ve been avoided if it weren’t for harrow
3). Harrow isn’t really a good king as was showed in the entire series, in other words, an idiot, and not the naruto idiot king
4). I really don’t see how Dark magic is so bad, unless it’s used on sentient, the dragons on Xadia must be herbivores since they dislike killing creatures
Hmm you OC for alchemist
1). Don’t particularly like them
2). Most of those situations that dark magic solved would’ve been avoided if it weren’t for harrow
3). Harrow isn’t really a good king as was showed in the entire series, in other words, an idiot, and not the naruto idiot king
4). I really don’t see how Dark magic is so bad, unless it’s used on sentient, the dragons on Xadia must be herbivores since they dislike killing creatures