8/29/2020 c1 44delirious.melon
Hmmm... After reading your profile, I believe it is safe to say you are homophobic. And after reading this story, I believe it's safe to say you should probably get a beta reader. There were several punctuation errors as well as typos, and this was just generally poorly written. Please try and put a little bit of effort into your work. Have a lovely day!

-UltimatexAdmin