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44m c10 lynarizsajise1
That was good! Can’t wait for an update!
6h c1 lynarizsajise1
Nice first chapter
1/12 c1 Wednesday's Jest
This really needs some proofreading and likely a beta reader. The basic premise is fine, but the opening line of the story has missing words, repeated phrasing, and a run-on sentence. It doesn't get much better from there.

Thank you for sharing your story.
1/7 c10 stylo1
why do they act so strange toward a ceberus? hagrid had one, so its not like it is a mystical creature just a magical one
1/7 c10 Addicted to Reading018
Keep it up
1/3 c10 Oghenevwogaga
Interesting. I'll stick around
12/30/2020 c10 Guest
Really liked the character interaction this chapter.
12/30/2020 c10 m.ispanki
really nice story
12/27/2020 c10 thiago.anime.neves
Coool
12/27/2020 c1 16bauers374
This is the closest thing I'll get to a teacher having their office in the CoS...
12/27/2020 c10 TruePork
Ah a Christmas present delivered by hades himself.
12/25/2020 c10 Guest
Merry Christmas to you

Huzzah we got the first kiss with Lily

Can’t wait for the next chapter hope it’s out soon
12/26/2020 c10 2Valkorion510
Why don't you have Alton end up with a harem? Lily and Bellatrix and whatever Demigodesses end up meeting him. God knows it's a standard practice to have a harem in his father's side of the family.
12/26/2020 c10 reader41532
amazing chap
12/26/2020 c2 Katt31257
What the fbck is this crap?
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