for All Good8/24/2020 c2 Guest
I start loving this story , its really good, emotional , I just hope they can fix things fast , , I can't stand the idea of him with Nita , I hate it.,
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I start loving this story , its really good, emotional , I just hope they can fix things fast , , I can't stand the idea of him with Nita , I hate it.,
Your fan # 1 ;)
8/23/2020 c1 guest
AHHHH I loved it! I can’t wait for more!
AHHHH I loved it! I can’t wait for more!
8/21/2020 c1 RebeccaAnne46
Oh my god! This is so good! You are one amazing writer. I can't stop smiling XD
Oh my god! This is so good! You are one amazing writer. I can't stop smiling XD
8/21/2020 c1 Raysofsun
Hey Kiki! Loved this so much! Will we ever get Tobias POV of will you stick to tris?
Hey Kiki! Loved this so much! Will we ever get Tobias POV of will you stick to tris?
8/20/2020 c1 
4Divergent31
I loved this chapter. You’re such a good writer. I can’t wait for the next one!
4Divergent31I loved this chapter. You’re such a good writer. I can’t wait for the next one!
8/20/2020 c1 Guest
Kiki! What can I tell you? Well ,first chapter and my heart is beating fast, can't wait for next chapter, wow girl you are amazing .
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Kiki! What can I tell you? Well ,first chapter and my heart is beating fast, can't wait for next chapter, wow girl you are amazing .
Your Fan # 1 ;)